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Started by Will Dockery
Sat, 09 Apr 2016 01:26
Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: Will Dockery
Date: Sat, 09 Apr 2016 01:26
Date: Sat, 09 Apr 2016 01:26
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Chorus Six Dollars in the bucket collect for the street singer. Old man with beads paints a chinaberry points out the parrots. Blonde after blonde after blonde after the parade. People start looking really strange again. I must seem likewise to them as this dusty smell surrounds me. I'd draw these people with words but I'm not fast enough. They pass and fade part of the parade. On this really old wall good view from up here. Forever is a long time but not as long as yesterday. -Will Dockery
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: General Zod
Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2019 21:23
Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2019 21:23
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On Saturday, April 9, 2016 at 4:26:59 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery™ wrote: > Chorus Six > > Dollars in the bucket > collect for the street singer. > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry > points out the parrots. > > Blonde after blonde after blonde > after the parade. > People start looking really strange again. > > I must seem likewise to them > as this dusty smell surrounds me. > I'd draw these people with words > but I'm not fast enough. > > They pass and fade > part of the parade. > > On this really old wall > good view from up here. > Forever is a long time > but not as long as yesterday. > > -Will Dockery Is this a re-write?
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: Dental River
Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2019 22:12
Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2019 22:12
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On Thursday, March 21, 2019 at 9:23:16 PM UTC-7, General Zod wrote: > On Saturday, April 9, 2016 at 4:26:59 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery™ wrote: > > Chorus Six > > > > Dollars in the bucket > > collect for the street singer. > > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry > > points out the parrots. > > > > Blonde after blonde after blonde > > after the parade. > > People start looking really strange again. > > > > I must seem likewise to them > > as this dusty smell surrounds me. > > I'd draw these people with words > > but I'm not fast enough. > > > > They pass and fade > > part of the parade. > > > > On this really old wall > > good view from up here. > > Forever is a long time > > but not as long as yesterday. > > > > -Will Dockery > > Is this a re-write? Of "Tomorrow Is A Long Time" by Bob Dylan? Yup.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: "Chafetz Chayim
Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2019 23:17
Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2019 23:17
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On Thursday, March 21, 2019 at 10:12:48 PM UTC-7, Dental River wrote: > > Is this a re-write? > > Of "Tomorrow Is A Long Time" by Bob Dylan? Yup. Shalom & Erev tov...I have the Shabtai Zisel / 'Bob Dylan' words before me, the earliest from 11 August 1962. Along with many others, Shabtai Zisel was using as a template 'Westron Wind', 15th century, 4 lines + melody. In November 1962, for Witmark, he recorded a version which, nearly 57 years later, is still riveting. Unfortunately for 'Dental River', he does not know what he is talking about. Will has not rewritten 'Tomorrow is a long time'. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ STEPHAN PICKERING / חפץ ח"ם בן אברהם Torah אלילה Yehu'di Apikores / Philologia Kabbalistica Speculativa Researcher לחיות זמן רב ולשגשג...לעולם לא עוד THE KABBALAH FRACTALS PROJECT לעולם לא אשכח IN PROGRESS: Shabtai Zisel ben Avraham v'Rachel Riva: davening in the musematic dark
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: =?UTF-8?B?V2lsbC
Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2019 23:34
Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2019 23:34
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On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 1:12:48 AM UTC-4, Dental River wrote: > On Thursday, March 21, 2019 at 9:23:16 PM UTC-7, General Zod wrote: > > Will Dockery™ wrote: > > > > Chorus Six > > > > > > Dollars in the bucket > > > collect for the street singer. > > > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry > > > points out the parrots. > > > > > > Blonde after blonde after blonde > > > after the parade. > > > People start looking really strange again. > > > > > > I must seem likewise to them > > > as this dusty smell surrounds me. > > > I'd draw these people with words > > > but I'm not fast enough. > > > > > > They pass and fade > > > part of the parade. > > > > > > On this really old wall > > > good view from up here. > > > Forever is a long time > > > but not as long as yesterday. > > > > > > -Will Dockery > > > > Is this a re-write? > > Of "Tomorrow Is A Long Time" by Bob Dylan? Yup. You're really stretching it there, Barry: Forever is a long time but not as long as yesterday. There may be some Star Trek in there, though. :)
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: "Will Dockery"
Date: Tue, 16 Jul 2019 15:29
Date: Tue, 16 Jul 2019 15:29
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"General Zod" wrote in message news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... > On Saturday, April 9, 2016 at 4:26:59 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery™ wrote: > > Chorus Six > > Dollars in the bucket > collect for the street singer. > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry > points out the parrots. > > Blonde after blonde after blonde > after the parade. > People start looking really strange again. > > I must seem likewise to them > as this dusty smell surrounds me. > I'd draw these people with words > but I'm not fast enough. > > They pass and fade > part of the parade. > > On this really old wall > good view from up here. > Forever is a long time > but not as long as yesterday. > > -Will Dockery > Is this a re-write? Basically the same, minor changes.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: Rex Hunter III
Date: Tue, 16 Jul 2019 17:20
Date: Tue, 16 Jul 2019 17:20
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On Saturday, April 9, 2016 at 4:26:59 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: > > Chorus Six > > Dollars in the bucket > collect for the street singer. > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry > points out the parrots. > > Blonde after blonde after blonde > after the parade. > People start looking really strange again. > > I must seem likewise to them > as this dusty smell surrounds me. > I'd draw these people with words > but I'm not fast enough. > > They pass and fade > part of the parade. > > On this really old wall > good view from up here. > Forever is a long time > but not as long as yesterday. > > -Will Dockery It is one of the best of your Florida poems no doubt about that....
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: will.dockery@gma
Date: Mon, 30 May 2022 15:40
Date: Mon, 30 May 2022 15:40
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"General Zod" wrote in message > news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >> Will Dockery™ wrote: > >> Chorus Six >> >> Dollars in the bucket >> collect for the street singer. >> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >> points out the parrots. >> >> Blonde after blonde after blonde >> after the parade. >> People start looking really strange again. >> >> I must seem likewise to them >> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >> I'd draw these people with words >> but I'm not fast enough. >> >> They pass and fade >> part of the parade. >> >> On this really old wall >> good view from up here. >> Forever is a long time >> but not as long as yesterday. >> >> -Will Dockery >> Is this a re-write? Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: Will Dockery
Date: Wed, 01 Jun 2022 13:41
Date: Wed, 01 Jun 2022 13:41
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2022 at 4:10:15 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: > > > "General Zod" wrote in message > >> news:7c12952a-069c-4230...@googlegroups.com... > >>> Will Dockery™ wrote: > >> > >>> Chorus Six > >>> > >>> Dollars in the bucket > >>> collect for the street singer. > >>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry > >>> points out the parrots. > >>> > >>> Blonde after blonde after blonde > >>> after the parade. > >>> People start looking really strange again. > >>> > >>> I must seem likewise to them > >>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. > >>> I'd draw these people with words > >>> but I'm not fast enough. > >>> > >>> They pass and fade > >>> part of the parade. > >>> > >>> On this really old wall > >>> good view from up here. > >>> Forever is a long time > >>> but not as long as yesterday. > >>> > >>> -Will Dockery > > >>> Is this a re-write? > > > Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. > Another of your greatest poems, Doc.... Thanks again for the nod, General Zod. 😃
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: tzod9964@gmail.c
Date: Wed, 01 Jun 2022 20:06
Date: Wed, 01 Jun 2022 20:06
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Will Dockery wrote: > "General Zod" wrote in message >> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>> Will Dockery™ wrote: >> >>> Chorus Six >>> >>> Dollars in the bucket >>> collect for the street singer. >>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>> points out the parrots. >>> >>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>> after the parade. >>> People start looking really strange again. >>> >>> I must seem likewise to them >>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>> I'd draw these people with words >>> but I'm not fast enough. >>> >>> They pass and fade >>> part of the parade. >>> >>> On this really old wall >>> good view from up here. >>> Forever is a long time >>> but not as long as yesterday. >>> >>> -Will Dockery >>> Is this a re-write? > Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. Another of your greatest poems, Doc....
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: Zod
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 10:42
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 10:42
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Will Dockery wrote: > > Chorus Six > > Dollars in the bucket > collect for the street singer. > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry > points out the parrots. > > Blonde after blonde after blonde > after the parade. > People start looking really strange again. > > I must seem likewise to them > as this dusty smell surrounds me. > I'd draw these people with words > but I'm not fast enough. > > They pass and fade > part of the parade. > > On this really old wall > good view from up here. > Forever is a long time > but not as long as yesterday. > > -Will Dockery Yet another true classic....
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: will.dockery@gma
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 11:26
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 11:26
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"General Zod" wrote in message > news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... > Will Dockery™ wrote: > >> Chorus Six >> >> Dollars in the bucket >> collect for the street singer. >> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >> points out the parrots. >> >> Blonde after blonde after blonde >> after the parade. >> People start looking really strange again. >> >> I must seem likewise to them >> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >> I'd draw these people with words >> but I'm not fast enough. >> >> They pass and fade >> part of the parade. >> >> On this really old wall >> good view from up here. >> Forever is a long time >> but not as long as yesterday. >> >> -Will Dockery Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene. https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: Will Dockery
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 20:35
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 20:35
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On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 12:23:16 AM UTC-4, General Zod wrote: > On Saturday, April 9, 2016 at 4:26:59 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery™ wrote: > > > Chorus Six > > > > Dollars in the bucket > > collect for the street singer. > > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry > > points out the parrots. > > > > Blonde after blonde after blonde > > after the parade. > > People start looking really strange again. > > > > I must seem likewise to them > > as this dusty smell surrounds me. > > I'd draw these people with words > > but I'm not fast enough. > > > > They pass and fade > > part of the parade. > > > > On this really old wall > > good view from up here. > > Forever is a long time > > but not as long as yesterday. > > > > -Will Dockery > Is this a re-write? Slightly, mostly for punctuation and grammar.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 20:41
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 20:41
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Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> >> Chorus Six >> >> Dollars in the bucket >> collect for the street singer. >> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >> points out the parrots. >> >> Blonde after blonde after blonde >> after the parade. >> People start looking really strange again. >> >> I must seem likewise to them >> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >> I'd draw these people with words >> but I'm not fast enough. >> >> They pass and fade >> part of the parade. >> >> On this really old wall >> good view from up here. >> Forever is a long time >> but not as long as yesterday. >> >> -Will Dockery > Yet another true classic.... Thanks again for the endorsement, Zod.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: Zod
Date: Fri, 03 Jun 2022 13:04
Date: Fri, 03 Jun 2022 13:04
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On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 2:34:02 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: > On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 1:12:48 AM UTC-4, Dental River wrote: > > On Thursday, March 21, 2019 at 9:23:16 PM UTC-7, General Zod wrote: > > > Will Dockery wrote: > > > > > > Chorus Six > > > > > > > > Dollars in the bucket > > > > collect for the street singer. > > > > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry > > > > points out the parrots. > > > > > > > > Blonde after blonde after blonde > > > > after the parade. > > > > People start looking really strange again. > > > > > > > > I must seem likewise to them > > > > as this dusty smell surrounds me. > > > > I'd draw these people with words > > > > but I'm not fast enough. > > > > > > > > They pass and fade > > > > part of the parade. > > > > > > > > On this really old wall > > > > good view from up here. > > > > Forever is a long time > > > > but not as long as yesterday. > > > > > > > > -Will Dockery > > > > > > Is this a re-write? > > > > Of "Tomorrow Is A Long Time" by Bob Dylan? Yup. > You're really stretching it there, Barry: > Forever is a long time > but not as long as yesterday. > There may be some Star Trek in there, though. > > :) That is so cool if so.....
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: tzod9964@gmail.c
Date: Fri, 03 Jun 2022 20:35
Date: Fri, 03 Jun 2022 20:35
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Will Dockery wrote: > "General Zod" wrote in message >> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>> Will Dockery™ wrote: >> >>> Chorus Six >>> >>> Dollars in the bucket >>> collect for the street singer. >>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>> points out the parrots. >>> >>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>> after the parade. >>> People start looking really strange again. >>> >>> I must seem likewise to them >>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>> I'd draw these people with words >>> but I'm not fast enough. >>> >>> They pass and fade >>> part of the parade. >>> >>> On this really old wall >>> good view from up here. >>> Forever is a long time >>> but not as long as yesterday. >>> >>> -Will Dockery >>> Is this a re-write? > Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. Having second read, better than ever......
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: will.dockery@gma
Date: Sat, 04 Jun 2022 02:41
Date: Sat, 04 Jun 2022 02:41
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Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> >> Chorus Six >> >> Dollars in the bucket >> collect for the street singer. >> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >> points out the parrots. >> >> Blonde after blonde after blonde >> after the parade. >> People start looking really strange again. >> >> I must seem likewise to them >> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >> I'd draw these people with words >> but I'm not fast enough. >> >> They pass and fade >> part of the parade. >> >> On this really old wall >> good view from up here. >> Forever is a long time >> but not as long as yesterday. >> >> -Will Dockery > Yet another true classic.... Good evening, Zod, I hope you and Mike are doing well, and having a great weekend so far. 🙂
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: tzod9964@gmail.c
Date: Sat, 04 Jun 2022 15:55
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W.Dockery wrote: > "General Zod" wrote in message >> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >> Will Dockery™ wrote: >> >>> Chorus Six >>> >>> Dollars in the bucket >>> collect for the street singer. >>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>> points out the parrots. >>> >>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>> after the parade. >>> People start looking really strange again. >>> >>> I must seem likewise to them >>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>> I'd draw these people with words >>> but I'm not fast enough. >>> >>> They pass and fade >>> part of the parade. >>> >>> On this really old wall >>> good view from up here. >>> Forever is a long time >>> but not as long as yesterday. >>> >>> -Will Dockery > Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene. > https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y Cool visual data....
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: tzod9964@gmail.c
Date: Sun, 05 Jun 2022 21:28
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Will Dockery wrote: > Zod wrote: >> Will Dockery wrote: >>> >>> Chorus Six >>> >>> Dollars in the bucket >>> collect for the street singer. >>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>> points out the parrots. >>> >>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>> after the parade. >>> People start looking really strange again. >>> >>> I must seem likewise to them >>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>> I'd draw these people with words >>> but I'm not fast enough. >>> >>> They pass and fade >>> part of the parade. >>> >>> On this really old wall >>> good view from up here. >>> Forever is a long time >>> but not as long as yesterday. >>> >>> -Will Dockery >> Yet another true classic.... > Good evening, Zod, I hope you and Mike are doing well, and having a great weekend so far. > 🙂 Having a wonderful day, Mike and I are going swimming for a while....
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Sun, 05 Jun 2022 23:07
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General-Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> Zod wrote: >>> Will Dockery wrote: >>>> >>>> Chorus Six >>>> >>>> Dollars in the bucket >>>> collect for the street singer. >>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>>> points out the parrots. >>>> >>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>>> after the parade. >>>> People start looking really strange again. >>>> >>>> I must seem likewise to them >>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>>> I'd draw these people with words >>>> but I'm not fast enough. >>>> >>>> They pass and fade >>>> part of the parade. >>>> >>>> On this really old wall >>>> good view from up here. >>>> Forever is a long time >>>> but not as long as yesterday. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery >>> Yet another true classic.... >> Good evening, Zod, I hope you and Mike are doing well, and having a great weekend so far. >> > Having a wonderful day, Mike and I are going swimming for a while.... A good day for that. 🙂
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: will.dockery@gma
Date: Tue, 07 Jun 2022 00:49
Date: Tue, 07 Jun 2022 00:49
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General-Zod wrote: > W.Dockery wrote: >> "General Zod" wrote in message >>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>> Will Dockery™ wrote: >>> >>>> Chorus Six >>>> >>>> Dollars in the bucket >>>> collect for the street singer. >>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>>> points out the parrots. >>>> >>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>>> after the parade. >>>> People start looking really strange again. >>>> >>>> I must seem likewise to them >>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>>> I'd draw these people with words >>>> but I'm not fast enough. >>>> >>>> They pass and fade >>>> part of the parade. >>>> >>>> On this really old wall >>>> good view from up here. >>>> Forever is a long time >>>> but not as long as yesterday. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery >> Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene. >> https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y > Cool visual data.... That was a fun night. 🙂
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Wed, 08 Jun 2022 06:19
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Zod wrote: > On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 2:34:02 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: >> On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 1:12:48 AM UTC-4, Dental River wrote: >> > On Thursday, March 21, 2019 at 9:23:16 PM UTC-7, General Zod wrote: >> > > Will Dockery wrote: >> > >> > > > Chorus Six >> > > > >> > > > Dollars in the bucket >> > > > collect for the street singer. >> > > > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >> > > > points out the parrots. >> > > > >> > > > Blonde after blonde after blonde >> > > > after the parade. >> > > > People start looking really strange again. >> > > > >> > > > I must seem likewise to them >> > > > as this dusty smell surrounds me. >> > > > I'd draw these people with words >> > > > but I'm not fast enough. >> > > > >> > > > They pass and fade >> > > > part of the parade. >> > > > >> > > > On this really old wall >> > > > good view from up here. >> > > > Forever is a long time >> > > > but not as long as yesterday. >> > > > >> > > > -Will Dockery >> > > >> > > Is this a re-write? >> > >> > Of "Tomorrow Is A Long Time" by Bob Dylan? Yup. >> You're really stretching it there, Barry: >> Forever is a long time >> but not as long as yesterday. >> There may be some Star Trek in there, though. >> >> :) > That is so cool if so..... Good evening, thanks again, my friend.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Wed, 08 Jun 2022 15:17
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General-Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> "General Zod" wrote in message >>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>>> Will Dockery™ wrote: >>> >>>> Chorus Six >>>> >>>> Dollars in the bucket >>>> collect for the street singer. >>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>>> points out the parrots. >>>> >>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>>> after the parade. >>>> People start looking really strange again. >>>> >>>> I must seem likewise to them >>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>>> I'd draw these people with words >>>> but I'm not fast enough. >>>> >>>> They pass and fade >>>> part of the parade. >>>> >>>> On this really old wall >>>> good view from up here. >>>> Forever is a long time >>>> but not as long as yesterday. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery >>>> Is this a re-write? >> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. > Another of your greatest poems, Doc.... I agree that I was nailing it goes n that era. 🙂
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Sun, 12 Jun 2022 01:06
Date: Sun, 12 Jun 2022 01:06
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General-Zod wrote: > W.Dockery wrote: >> "General Zod" wrote in message >>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>> Will Dockery™ wrote: >>> >>>> Chorus Six >>>> >>>> Dollars in the bucket >>>> collect for the street singer. >>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>>> points out the parrots. >>>> >>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>>> after the parade. >>>> People start looking really strange again. >>>> >>>> I must seem likewise to them >>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>>> I'd draw these people with words >>>> but I'm not fast enough. >>>> >>>> They pass and fade >>>> part of the parade. >>>> >>>> On this really old wall >>>> good view from up here. >>>> Forever is a long time >>>> but not as long as yesterday. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery >> Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene. >> https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y > Cool visual data.... Thanks again for the nod, Zod. 🙂
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Sun, 12 Jun 2022 06:47
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Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> >> Chorus Six >> >> Dollars in the bucket >> collect for the street singer. >> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >> points out the parrots. >> >> Blonde after blonde after blonde >> after the parade. >> People start looking really strange again. >> >> I must seem likewise to them >> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >> I'd draw these people with words >> but I'm not fast enough. >> >> They pass and fade >> part of the parade. >> >> On this really old wall >> good view from up here. >> Forever is a long time >> but not as long as yesterday. >> >> -Will Dockery > Yet another true classic.... Good morning my friend, I hope you and Mike are having a great weekend.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: will.dockery@gma
Date: Mon, 13 Jun 2022 06:01
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Zod wrote: > On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 2:34:02 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: >> On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 1:12:48 AM UTC-4, Dental River wrote: >> > On Thursday, March 21, 2019 at 9:23:16 PM UTC-7, General Zod wrote: >> > > Will Dockery wrote: >> > >> > > > Chorus Six >> > > > >> > > > Dollars in the bucket >> > > > collect for the street singer. >> > > > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >> > > > points out the parrots. >> > > > >> > > > Blonde after blonde after blonde >> > > > after the parade. >> > > > People start looking really strange again. >> > > > >> > > > I must seem likewise to them >> > > > as this dusty smell surrounds me. >> > > > I'd draw these people with words >> > > > but I'm not fast enough. >> > > > >> > > > They pass and fade >> > > > part of the parade. >> > > > >> > > > On this really old wall >> > > > good view from up here. >> > > > Forever is a long time >> > > > but not as long as yesterday. >> > > > >> > > > -Will Dockery >> > > >> > > Is this a re-write? >> > >> > Of "Tomorrow Is A Long Time" by Bob Dylan? Yup. >> You're really stretching it there, Barry: >> Forever is a long time >> but not as long as yesterday. >> There may be some Star Trek in there, though. >> >> :) > That is so cool if so..... Good evening, and thanks for the feedback.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
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General-Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> "General Zod" wrote in message >>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>>> Will Dockery™ wrote: >>> >>>> Chorus Six >>>> >>>> Dollars in the bucket >>>> collect for the street singer. >>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>>> points out the parrots. >>>> >>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>>> after the parade. >>>> People start looking really strange again. >>>> >>>> I must seem likewise to them >>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>>> I'd draw these people with words >>>> but I'm not fast enough. >>>> >>>> They pass and fade >>>> part of the parade. >>>> >>>> On this really old wall >>>> good view from up here. >>>> Forever is a long time >>>> but not as long as yesterday. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery >>>> Is this a re-write? >> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. > Another of your greatest poems, Doc.... Good morning my friend and thanks again for the positive feedback.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: vhugofan@gmail.c
Date: Sat, 18 Jun 2022 20:28
Date: Sat, 18 Jun 2022 20:28
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Will Dockery wrote: > Zod wrote: >> Will Dockery wrote: >>> >>> Chorus Six >>> >>> Dollars in the bucket >>> collect for the street singer. >>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>> points out the parrots. >>> >>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>> after the parade. >>> People start looking really strange again. >>> >>> I must seem likewise to them >>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>> I'd draw these people with words >>> but I'm not fast enough. >>> >>> They pass and fade >>> part of the parade. >>> >>> On this really old wall >>> good view from up here. >>> Forever is a long time >>> but not as long as yesterday. >>> >>> -Will Dockery >> Yet another true classic.... > Good evening, Zod, I hope you and Mike are doing well, and having a great weekend so far. > 🙂 Hi there yes Mike and I are having fun in the sun this afternoon here on the river bank....
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: rockystoneberg04
Date: Sat, 18 Jun 2022 21:36
Date: Sat, 18 Jun 2022 21:36
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Will Dockery wrote: > On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 12:23:16 AM UTC-4, General Zod wrote: >> On Saturday, April 9, 2016 at 4:26:59 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery™ wrote: >> >> > Chorus Six >> > >> > Dollars in the bucket >> > collect for the street singer. >> > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >> > points out the parrots. >> > >> > Blonde after blonde after blonde >> > after the parade. >> > People start looking really strange again. >> > >> > I must seem likewise to them >> > as this dusty smell surrounds me. >> > I'd draw these people with words >> > but I'm not fast enough. >> > >> > They pass and fade >> > part of the parade. >> > >> > On this really old wall >> > good view from up here. >> > Forever is a long time >> > but not as long as yesterday. >> > >> > -Will Dockery >> Is this a re-write? > Slightly, mostly for punctuation and grammar. One of your most lovely works of poetry Mr. Doc....
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Sun, 19 Jun 2022 03:15
Date: Sun, 19 Jun 2022 03:15
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Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> >> Chorus Six >> >> Dollars in the bucket >> collect for the street singer. >> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >> points out the parrots. >> >> Blonde after blonde after blonde >> after the parade. >> People start looking really strange again. >> >> I must seem likewise to them >> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >> I'd draw these people with words >> but I'm not fast enough. >> >> They pass and fade >> part of the parade. >> >> On this really old wall >> good view from up here. >> Forever is a long time >> but not as long as yesterday. >> >> -Will Dockery > Yet another true classic.... Good morning my friend and thanks again for the endorsement.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: will.dockery@gma
Date: Sun, 19 Jun 2022 14:44
Date: Sun, 19 Jun 2022 14:44
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General-Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> "General Zod" wrote in message >>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>>> Will Dockery™ wrote: >>> >>>> Chorus Six >>>> >>>> Dollars in the bucket >>>> collect for the street singer. >>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>>> points out the parrots. >>>> >>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>>> after the parade. >>>> People start looking really strange again. >>>> >>>> I must seem likewise to them >>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>>> I'd draw these people with words >>>> but I'm not fast enough. >>>> >>>> They pass and fade >>>> part of the parade. >>>> >>>> On this really old wall >>>> good view from up here. >>>> Forever is a long time >>>> but not as long as yesterday. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery >>>> Is this a re-write? >> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. > Another of your greatest poems, Doc.... Good morning my friend, and thanks for the positive feedback. 🙂
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Sun, 19 Jun 2022 20:51
Date: Sun, 19 Jun 2022 20:51
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Zod wrote: > On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 2:34:02 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: > >> > > > Chorus Six >> > > > >> > > > Dollars in the bucket >> > > > collect for the street singer. >> > > > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >> > > > points out the parrots. >> > > > >> > > > Blonde after blonde after blonde >> > > > after the parade. >> > > > People start looking really strange again. >> > > > >> > > > I must seem likewise to them >> > > > as this dusty smell surrounds me. >> > > > I'd draw these people with words >> > > > but I'm not fast enough. >> > > > >> > > > They pass and fade >> > > > part of the parade. >> > > > >> > > > On this really old wall >> > > > good view from up here. >> > > > Forever is a long time >> > > > but not as long as yesterday. >> > > > >> > > > -Will Dockery >> > > >> > > Is this a re-write? >> > >> > Of "Tomorrow Is A Long Time" by Bob Dylan? Yup. >> You're really stretching it there, Barry: >> Forever is a long time >> but not as long as yesterday. >> There may be some Star Trek in there, though. >> >> :) > That is so cool if so..... It is indeed true. :)
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: will.dockery@gma
Date: Fri, 24 Jun 2022 06:02
Date: Fri, 24 Jun 2022 06:02
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General-Zod wrote: > W.Dockery wrote: >> "General Zod" wrote in message >>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>> Will Dockery™ wrote: >>> >>>> Chorus Six >>>> >>>> Dollars in the bucket >>>> collect for the street singer. >>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>>> points out the parrots. >>>> >>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>>> after the parade. >>>> People start looking really strange again. >>>> >>>> I must seem likewise to them >>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>>> I'd draw these people with words >>>> but I'm not fast enough. >>>> >>>> They pass and fade >>>> part of the parade. >>>> >>>> On this really old wall >>>> good view from up here. >>>> Forever is a long time >>>> but not as long as yesterday. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery >> Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene. >> https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y > Cool visual data.... Good morning, and thanks again for reading and commenting.
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Sun, 31 Jul 2022 01:48
Date: Sun, 31 Jul 2022 01:48
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General-Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> "General Zod" wrote in message >>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>>> Will Dockery™ wrote: >>> >>>> Chorus Six >>>> >>>> Dollars in the bucket >>>> collect for the street singer. >>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>>> points out the parrots. >>>> >>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>>> after the parade. >>>> People start looking really strange again. >>>> >>>> I must seem likewise to them >>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>>> I'd draw these people with words >>>> but I'm not fast enough. >>>> >>>> They pass and fade >>>> part of the parade. >>>> >>>> On this really old wall >>>> good view from up here. >>>> Forever is a long time >>>> but not as long as yesterday. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery >>>> Is this a re-write? >> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. > Another of your greatest poems, Doc.... Good evening, Zod, and thanks again for the endorsement. 🙂
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Tue, 09 Aug 2022 09:22
Date: Tue, 09 Aug 2022 09:22
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"General Zod" wrote in message > news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >> Will Dockery™ wrote: > >>>> Chorus Six >>>> >>>> Dollars in the bucket >>>> collect for the street singer. >>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>>> points out the parrots. >>>> >>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>>> after the parade. >>>> People start looking really strange again. >>>> >>>> I must seem likewise to them >>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>>> I'd draw these people with words >>>> but I'm not fast enough. >>>> >>>> They pass and fade >>>> part of the parade. >>>> >>>> On this really old wall >>>> good view from up here. >>>> Forever is a long time >>>> but not as long as yesterday. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery > > Another of your greatest poems, Doc.... Thanks again for the nod, General Zod. 🙂
Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
Author: tzod9964@gmail.c
Date: Fri, 12 Aug 2022 21:11
Date: Fri, 12 Aug 2022 21:11
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Will Dockery wrote: > "General Zod" wrote in message >> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>> Will Dockery™ wrote: >> >>> Chorus Six >>> >>> Dollars in the bucket >>> collect for the street singer. >>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>> points out the parrots. >>> >>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>> after the parade. >>> People start looking really strange again. >>> >>> I must seem likewise to them >>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>> I'd draw these people with words >>> but I'm not fast enough. >>> >>> They pass and fade >>> part of the parade. >>> >>> On this really old wall >>> good view from up here. >>> Forever is a long time >>> but not as long as yesterday. >>> >>> -Will Dockery >>> Is this a re-write? > Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. I thank you for writing all these great poems...!
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