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Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

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From: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Wed, 08 Jun 2022 15:17
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General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> "General Zod"  wrote in message
>>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>>  Will Dockeryβ„’ wrote:
>>>
>>>> Chorus Six
>>>>
>>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>>> collect for the street singer.
>>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>>> points out the parrots.
>>>>
>>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>>> after the parade.
>>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>>
>>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>>
>>>> They pass and fade
>>>> part of the parade.
>>>>
>>>> On this really old wall
>>>> good view from up here.
>>>> Forever is a long time
>>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>>
>>>> -Will Dockery

>>>> Is this a re-write?

>> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

> Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

I agree that I was nailing it goes n that era.

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