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Article #820115Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
From: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Wed, 08 Jun 2022 15:17
Date: Wed, 08 Jun 2022 15:17
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General-Zod wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> "General Zod" wrote in message >>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>>> Will Dockeryβ’ wrote: >>> >>>> Chorus Six >>>> >>>> Dollars in the bucket >>>> collect for the street singer. >>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>>> points out the parrots. >>>> >>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>>> after the parade. >>>> People start looking really strange again. >>>> >>>> I must seem likewise to them >>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>>> I'd draw these people with words >>>> but I'm not fast enough. >>>> >>>> They pass and fade >>>> part of the parade. >>>> >>>> On this really old wall >>>> good view from up here. >>>> Forever is a long time >>>> but not as long as yesterday. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery >>>> Is this a re-write? >> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. > Another of your greatest poems, Doc.... I agree that I was nailing it goes n that era. π
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