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Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

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From: Will Dockery
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 20:35
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On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 12:23:16 AM UTC-4, General Zod wrote:
> On Saturday, April 9, 2016 at 4:26:59 AM UTC-4, Will Dockeryβ„’ wrote: 
>
> > Chorus Six 
> > 
> > Dollars in the bucket 
> > collect for the street singer. 
> > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry 
> > points out the parrots. 
> > 
> > Blonde after blonde after blonde 
> > after the parade. 
> > People start looking really strange again. 
> > 
> > I must seem likewise to them 
> > as this dusty smell surrounds me. 
> > I'd draw these people with words 
> > but I'm not fast enough. 
> > 
> > They pass and fade 
> > part of the parade. 
> > 
> > On this really old wall 
> > good view from up here. 
> > Forever is a long time 
> > but not as long as yesterday. 
> > 
> > -Will Dockery
> Is this a re-write?

Slightly, mostly for punctuation and grammar.

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