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Article #818947Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
From: Will Dockery
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 20:35
Date: Thu, 02 Jun 2022 20:35
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On Friday, March 22, 2019 at 12:23:16 AM UTC-4, General Zod wrote: > On Saturday, April 9, 2016 at 4:26:59 AM UTC-4, Will Dockeryβ’ wrote: > > > Chorus Six > > > > Dollars in the bucket > > collect for the street singer. > > Old man with beads paints a chinaberry > > points out the parrots. > > > > Blonde after blonde after blonde > > after the parade. > > People start looking really strange again. > > > > I must seem likewise to them > > as this dusty smell surrounds me. > > I'd draw these people with words > > but I'm not fast enough. > > > > They pass and fade > > part of the parade. > > > > On this really old wall > > good view from up here. > > Forever is a long time > > but not as long as yesterday. > > > > -Will Dockery > Is this a re-write? Slightly, mostly for punctuation and grammar.
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