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Article #831804Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues
From: tzod9964@gmail.c
Date: Fri, 12 Aug 2022 21:11
Date: Fri, 12 Aug 2022 21:11
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Will Dockery wrote: > "General Zod" wrote in message >> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com... >>> Will Dockeryβ’ wrote: >> >>> Chorus Six >>> >>> Dollars in the bucket >>> collect for the street singer. >>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry >>> points out the parrots. >>> >>> Blonde after blonde after blonde >>> after the parade. >>> People start looking really strange again. >>> >>> I must seem likewise to them >>> as this dusty smell surrounds me. >>> I'd draw these people with words >>> but I'm not fast enough. >>> >>> They pass and fade >>> part of the parade. >>> >>> On this really old wall >>> good view from up here. >>> Forever is a long time >>> but not as long as yesterday. >>> >>> -Will Dockery >>> Is this a re-write? > Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend. I thank you for writing all these great poems...!
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