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Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

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From: tzod9964@gmail.c
Date: Fri, 12 Aug 2022 21:11
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Will Dockery wrote:

> "General Zod"  wrote in message
>> news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
>>>  Will Dockeryβ„’ wrote:
>>
>>> Chorus Six
>>>
>>> Dollars in the bucket
>>> collect for the street singer.
>>> Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
>>> points out the parrots.
>>>
>>> Blonde after blonde after blonde
>>> after the parade.
>>> People start looking really strange again.
>>>
>>> I must seem likewise to them
>>> as this dusty smell surrounds me.
>>> I'd draw these people with words
>>> but I'm not fast enough.
>>>
>>> They pass and fade
>>> part of the parade.
>>>
>>> On this really old wall
>>> good view from up here.
>>> Forever is a long time
>>> but not as long as yesterday.
>>>
>>> -Will Dockery

>>> Is this a re-write?

> Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

I thank you for writing all these great poems...!

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