🚀 go-pugleaf

"Dr. Flonkenstein" <gregoriy_rasp...@hotmail.com> wrote in message news:<pan.2003.11...@hotmail.com>...
> Being tired of lurking, on Sat, 15 Nov 2003 01:03:07 +0000, Chandra P. Das
> posted:
> 
> > yyyiii...@yahoo.com wrote:
> >> me chinese concubine
> >> ====================================================================
> >> 
> >> Isabelle will make a pair of pants for ying for forty dollars. She
> >> finished measurements with a compliment, "your skin is so soft..." Two
> >> hands met in the air, rubbing side to side, with differentiated
> >> pressure, swirling. They say nipples are windows of heart. Suffocation
> >> is a way of accumulation...
> >> 
> >> Life is random. Isabelle is the third woman came to ying1s life since
> >> the new year. Each of them has a boyfriend.
> >> 
> >> Eva always leaves quarter to eight in the evening taking metro to work.
> >> Melanie has Cinderella syndrome that she must be back by midnight.
> >> Isabelle stays over about once a week reminding ying how two other
> >> girls' boyfriends would hold them fall asleep then wake them up with
> >> morning kisses or may be a poem just finished before the sky turns
> >> white.
> >> 
> >> Gender roles started switching since the new year of 1996. The whole
> >> world got mad about how women will pick up men and sleep around.
> >> 
> >> This is a Sunday morning, Isabelle is sitting in a restaurant couldn1t
> >> decide what to order for breakfast. Melanie is running around naked
> >> gathering laundry. Eva is still asleep. she faces the wall, her
> >> boyfriend faces the window.
> >> 
> >> ying is sitting in front of the window, wondering why street lights
> >> could outshine the sun in the morning...
> > 
> > Keep the last sentence-- everything else is unsalvageable junk. Seriously,
> > I don't know what else to say but that this is just scatter-brained crap.
> > It doesn't even make for interesting diary-entry prose. It's awful, yingo.
> > Let's not even go into the grammar and syntax errors. This is just another
> > rendition of the hackneyed teen-angst thought process in a sort of
> > unimaginative, spaced out way. Yawn. It's not the language mistakes that
> > makes this piece unbearable to read. It just sucks. Sorry. Lastly: I don't
> > see how this is a 'rewrite' of what you posted seven years ago. You've sat
> > on this for seven years?? Christ! You need to pull your head out of your
> > ass, stop babbling like a manic drunkard and start reading some poetry and
> > prose, kiddo. You're not even good enough to be called a beginner yet.
> > HTH. Good luck.
> 
> Some friend/relative/family sent me this email.
> But the conotation is that none of these girls was aged more than 11 yrs
> at that time. 
> ying is a notorious child abuser and should have been jailed since long.
>
where was it? you can't just defame people.

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