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Arzoo saahiba, aadaab arz!

nayee kahaanee sunaane kaa bahut bahut shukriya!  maasha Allaah
is baar bhee aap ne kyaa Khoob kahee hai---chhoTee see kahaanee
meiN aik duniyaa basaa kar rakh dee :)  paRhte vaqt yooN lag
rahaa thaa k tamaam vaaqi'aat aaNkhoN ke saamne ho rahe haiN...
kahaanee kyaa hai, kisee film yaa Drame kaa asar rakhtee hai!!

manzar-kashee, character development vGh. hasb e ma'amool Khoob
haiN (mere kehne kaa matlab yeh hai k aa'inda ham aap kee
tehreeroN par likhte vaqt in baatoN kee alag daad na deN
ge---it is automatically understood that your stories will
have these qualities! :)) ).

qaabil e Ghaur hai k agarche kahaanee "third person" meiN kahee
gayee hai, sirf aik kirdaar ke dimaaGhee Haalaat/Khayaalaat
bayaan kiye gaye haiN (jaisaa k umooman "first person" meiN
kiyaa jaataa hai).  is kaa asar bhee Khoob rahaa (aur mere
Khayaal se yeh kaam aasaan na hogaa, so is ke liye mubaarak-baad!)

chand aik "loose strings" reh gaye haiN---paRhne vaaloN ke zehn
meiN shaayad yeh savaal reh jaayeN ge k Sana ke vaalidain kaa
kyaa huaa aur Nida kaa kyaa huaa.  Khair yeh baat shaayad ziyaadah
ma'yoob bhee naheeN.

unvaan (thoRaa-saa hee sahee) khaTak rahaa hai.  "naa-qaabil e
faraamosh" tarkeeb Khoob hai, aur kahaanee meiN jin vaaqi'aat
kaa zikr hai voh yaqeenan naa-qaabil e faraamosh haiN, lekin
shaayad pooree kahaanee ke liye is se behtar unvaan milnaa
naa-mumkin naheeN ho gaa.

With best regards, aap kee aglee behtareen kahaanee kaa muntazir,

Jasho

a_rzoo@hotmail.com (arzoo) wrote in message news:<8d4dca1d.0402101200.601949d4@posting.google.com>...
> Na qabil-e- faramosh
>
>
>   Choti si thi jab us ki ammi  us kay haathoon ka piyala bana kay
> kehtin " dua mango hum Allah miyan kay ghar phir say  jain"  aur  wo
> foran ankhain sakhti say meech kay hil hil kay is jumlay  ki gardaan
> karnay lagti  ye janay baghair ke Allah miyan ka ghar kia hay ? kahaan
>  hay? kaisa hay?
>  paanch  saal ki umar main usay to bas itna maloom tha ke is naey
> shehar main  us ki aik hi saheeli " gurya " thi jis ka ghar  waisa hi
> sabz rang ka hay jaisa ke us ki man pasand frok ka .
>
>  thori bari hoey to kitab ho ya Tv jahaan bhi nazer ata Us ki ammi
> foran kehtin " Sna  , ye daikho  ye hay Allah miyan ka ghar " wo  la
> parwahi say tasweer ko daikh kay apni ammi  kay chehray ko daikhnay
> lagti jahaan  na janay kia hota ke wo sochnay lagti ke us ki  ammi ko
> ye ghar kitna  pasand hay , akhir kioon?
>
> waqt kay saath saath  is chotay say sawal main  aur buhut say sawaloon
> ka izafa hota gaia , her saal anay wali Baqr Eid  pe  Haj aur Qurbani
> kay alfaaz aur muhallay main kisi Haji kay anay ya janay ki khabrain
> ,Aur  sab say barh kay , 9 zil haj ko us ki ammi ka TV  daikhnay ka
> ishteyaaq , jaisay us kay ander tajasus aur shauq  ki chingaryaan
> roshan karnay lagta.
>
> dasween kay imtehaan say farigh hoey to gurya kay saath mil kay
> palmistry ka shauq  paal liya ,ab bas her aik ka hath paker kay baith
> jaati . pehlay apna phir gurya ka phir ammi papa ka , phir saari class
> main sab larkyoon ka , aur kartay kartay khandaan main mashhoor ho
> gaey . apnay tak aur larkyoon tak shughal laganay ki baat to usay bari
> pasand thi laikin jab bhi wo apni khala bi kay ghar jati wo aik hi
> sawal kartin " Sna baiti, a zara daikh mairay hath main  Haj ki lakeer
> hay ke nahi " us nay aaj tak kisi kitaab main Haj ki lakeer nahi parhi
> thi laikin wo aisay hi natak kar kay keh daiti "haan khala bi buhut
> bari lakeer hay Haj ki " aur phir khala bi  hath khainch laitin aur
> pursakoon si ho jatin. khala bi  kay is sawal  ki waja say us nay kaey
> kitabain chaanin laikin Haj ki lakeer kahin nahi mili . phir usay
> apni khala bi ki tarha kaey log milay jo yehi sawal kartay " mairay
> haath pe Haj ki  lakeer hay ?" us kay paas is ka jawaab kabhi na hota
> . Haj ki lakeer  kay muamay say  tang aa kay us nay is shughal ko
> khair baad keh diya .
>
> College main gaey to is jaisay dunya aur bhi  rangeen ho gaey , Allah
> miyan kay ghar ki bajaey ab wo  hazaar tareekhi jaghoon aur dunya ki
> bay shumaar  ala shaan emaratoon  kay baray main parhnay lagi .
> imartoon kay isi shauq ki waja say  wo architecture  main masters
> karna chahti thi , college kay trips ka silsila bhi  chalta raha  aur
> saath hi saath us kay kamray ki deewarain mukhtalif emartoon  kay
> posters say bharti rahin . aaj bhi wo abhi taj mehal ka khoobsoorat sa
> poster laga rahi thi ke ammi ki awaz aey " Sna , gurya aey hay ."
> jaldi say kursi say neechay utri ,  gurya kay anays say pehlay  aina
> daikha aur kursi jagah per rakhtay hi , darwazay pe khari Nida ko
> garam joshi say salam kiya aur kaha  " aray waah , aaj to eid kara di
> tum nay " us nay galay miltay hoay kaha. " w , salaam . main nay socha
> kabhi kabhi achanak bhi ana chahyay , ziada khushi hoti hay " Nida
> baig maiz pe rakhtay hoay boli." to kia ho raha tha , " " aray wah
> jaisay tum nay daikha hi nahi , ye daikho " us nay taj mehel kay
> poster ki taraf  ishara kartay hoay kaha . " waao ...that's nice"
> kahaan say mara hay ?"  Nida nay paas jatay hoay poocha ." maara nahi
> yaar, khareeda hay pooray 75 rupay main" " maira khiyal hay ke dunya
> main sirf 7 ujoobay hain laikin tumharay kamray main to hazaroon
> ujooboon ki tasweerain lagi hain " Nida nay saray kamray ki deewaroon
> per lagi , Eharaam-e- misr , Eiphel tower, Peica tower, WTC, Deewar-e-
> cheen , Room aur Spain  ki purani  emartain, China Aur Pakistan ki
> Dhair saari mashhoor-o- maroof emartoon ki choti bari  hazaroon
> tasweeroon   per aik nazer dauratay hoay kaha . "Acha hay na kam az
> kam tumharay bhaey jaan kay  saRay hoay shauq say acha hay na jinhoon
> nay dunya bhar ki garyaan saja rakhi hain dewaroon pe" Sna nay ankh
> martay hoay khushgawaar mood main kaha . "  Acha to kia tum un say
> muqabla karti ho ""Nida nay maanee khaiz nazroon say daikhtay hoay
> poocha ." main kahan , wo kartay hain mujh say muqabla " Sna nay
> nazrain churatay hoay kaha aur saath hi poocha . " waisay japan ja kay
> to buhut khush hoon gay  ab" Nida nay qadray udasi say jawaab diya  "
> haan teen saal bad aein gay engeenering ki  degree mukamal kar kay "
> Sna nay usay chutki kaati aur hanstay hoay kaha " Aur aik added brand
> new  japani  gaari aur japani gurya  lay kay" aur  saath hi donoon
> hansnay lagin.
>
> chaar saal ka arsa parhayi main . imtehanoon main aur  dunya  ki
> emartoon ko  sarahatay hoay kab guzra Sna ko  pata bhi na laga . is
> dauraan Nida  ki shadi ho gaey aur khud us ka nikah Nida kay bhaey
> Arsalaan  kay saath  ho gaia aur ab do mah baad  wo rukhsat ho kay
> halkay sabz rang kay man pasand  ghar main janay wali thi . wo apnay
> kamray ki dewaroon per say  tasweerain utaar kay sanbhaal  kay rakh
> rahi thi ke us ki ammi  nay daikha to poocha " Sna !! ye tum saath lay
> jao gi kia" " haan ammi jaan ,, bhala ye main bhool sakti hoon ..maira
> asaasa  hain ye"  us nay lambay say dibbay ko band kartay hoay kaha ."
> tauba hay , bhala in emartoon main  Allah jany tumhain kia nazer ata
> hay , wahan bhi ja kay  ye gand sajao gi  dewaroon pe " us ki ammi nay
> nagawari say kaha . " ammi jaan aap ki baiti Architect hay koey mazaaq
> nahi ...in kay baghair ab mairi  pehchaan nahi. " us nay  baray fakher
> say kaha." acha tum pe to junoon sa sawaar hay , suna hay Japaan main
> aur bhi khoobsoorat emartain hain ," us ki ammi nay sochtay hoay kaha
> " haan ammi Arsalaan bata rahy thay , bas mujhay wahaan janay dain
> phir daikhna kaisay kaisay design karoon gi " , " Acha tumharay  janay
> kay baad hum  tumhari  chachi kay paas  Jeddah  ja rahay hain hain aur
>  wahaan umray karain gay aur Haj  kar kay wapas aein gay " us ki ammi
> nay  bari khushi say bataia . Sna nay ammi ki ankhoon main chamak
> daikhi to sochnay lagi ke  ammi ko  mairi rukhsati ka koey dukh nahi
> laikin Haj ki kitni khushi hay.laikin saath hi usay ye  baat
> tasaleebakhs bhi lagi kam az kam ab usay ammi papa ki itni fikar nahi
> rahy gi.
>
>  do maah baad rukhsat ho kay wo chand haftay Sabz ghar main rahi aur
> phir Arsalaan  kay saath  japan   chali aey . yahaan sharoo kay  kaey
> maheenay  wo arsalaan kay saath mukhtalif jaghain daikhti rahi  . phir
> Arslaan ki company ki taraf say aik tour  main wo log Itally bhi gaey
> aur France bhi .dunya ko daikhnay kay saath saath usay ammmi papa kay
> phone atay rahay . " kabhi  Makkah  ki fizaoon kay baray , kabhi
> khana kaaba ki tareef kartay hoay  aur kabhi madeenay raunaq kay
> baray...wo sochti us kay seedhay saadhay  waldain  inhi do jaghoon ko
> daikh kay itnay khush hain  yahaan aa kay aaj ki duyna ki taraqi
> daikhain to shaid sab bhool jain.
>
>  Shadi kay doosray hi saal Arsalaan nay aik din  kaha " Sna , main
> soch raha hoon is baar ammi dady ko Haj karwaoon ..tumhara kia khiyal
> hay?" ...Haj kay naam pe jaisay ,,, wo sakit  si ho gaey , phir boli "
> haan kioon nahi , mujhay kia aetraaz ho sakta hay " phir maiz pe  kisi
>  naqshay  pe jhuk gaey. " mager  maira  khiyal hay ke  Hum bhi jain ,
> mauqa bhi hay aur ammi dady  ko  company bhi rahay gi  " Arslaan nay
> Sna  kay haath say  pencil pakartay hoay kaha. Sna  ko aik dam kuch na
> soojha , khoey khoey si boli"  haan is say achi kia baat ho sakti hay
> " .." bas phir tayari paker lo ", Arsalaan nay ghoom kay khushi say
> kaha ... do mah baad  wo Haj ki saari tayaroon kay saath  jeddah
> pohnchay jahan say Arsalan kay waldain ko saath liya  aur haj kay
> liyay rawana hoay .Sna aur Arsalaan  nay Makkah  jatay hoay dhair
> saari kitaboon ko parha . Ehraam   aur Haj  kay saray  arkaan ko
> samjha  . aur  saas susar ki rahnumaey main  Allahumma labaik parhtay
> hoay  hajyoon  ki saf main shamil hoay.
>
> Masjid al haram  say kaafi  pehlay  hi  sarak pe chaltay hoay itnay
> rash aur hujoom main  Sna nay logoon kay chehroon  pe ajeeb sa junoon
> daikha , jaisay  maqnatees lohay ko  khainchta hay usay laga , sab log
> kahin khichay chalay ja rahay hain. Allahuma labaik ka wird kartay
> hoay wo zameen ko daikh kay chalnay lagi  ke Arsalaan nay ishara kar
> kay kaha "Sna ,samnay daikho" Sna  nay daikha ..sufaid marbal ki
> phaili hoaey emarat  charoon taraf  hajyoon  ka hujoom aur  fiza main
> " Allahuma labaik kay wird  kay jadoo main laal choocnhoon walay mast
> kabooter , us kay rongattay kharay ho gaey aur   qadam ruk gaey,
> bait-Allah  main usay buhut  pehlay hi Allah ka jalaal aur shaan ander
> tak mehsoos hoey   .Arsalaan nay us ka haath dady ko thamaia aur khud
> apni ammi ka hath paker liya . Bait-al haram main dakhil hoay  to
> jaisay logoon ka  sailaab beh raha ho  Sna  ki nazer  jaisay jhapakna
> bhool gaey us kay samnay  khana kaabah  tha . kalay rang kay ghulaaf
> main  dhaka hoa , khoobsoorat  Ayaat say muzayan , us ka dimaghjaisay
> shal sa ho gaia ho , usay nahi yaad kab Dady nay  usay paker kay
> chalatay hoay tawaf main ghaseet liya. phir jaisay  us  sailab main wo
> behnay lagi , dady nay usay yaad karaia ke tawaaf  main kia tasbeeh
> karni hay . laikin us ki nazer markaz say na hat saki . hajr-e- aswad
> kay samnay dady  kay kehnay pe  takbeer -e- tehreema kahi  aur phir
> usi markez kay gird behnay lagi . usay nahi yaad zameen pe qadam lagay
> ke nahi ? kitna fasla tay hoa ? kaisay hoa? bas aik ajeeb si baykhudi
> si thi jis main say her baar dady  ko usay nikalna parta . aur aglay
> rukan kay  liyay samjhana parta .
> muqam-e- ibraheem  kay baray bhi dady nay usay bataia warna usay to
> yaad na rehta .
>
> tawaf  kay baad saee kartay waqt bhi us ki nazer behak  kay  markaz pe
> par jaati . too palatna bhool jaati . saee kay baad  wo ammi kay saath
> Zam zam ki taraf gaey . pehlay piyas bhujhaey phir zaiq mehsoos kiya
> to usay laga ke nazer to paani ata hay  laikin paani mehsoos kioon
> nahi hota . koey nabeena aurat ankhoon pe laga rahi hay to koey apnay
> bachy kay sir pe daal rahi hay . usay aik aik nal kay peechay
> khawateen ki qatarain nazer ain . aik lamhay ko us nay socha lakhoon
> ki taadaad main Haj aur aik Zam zam ka Kunwaan . aur phir hazaroon
> saal purana . us kay rongattay phir kharay hoay . dimagh shal sa hoa
> aur wo pagaloon ki tarah Zam zam  kay paani kay cheentay monh pe
> dalnay lagi. wo jaisay jaisay paani kay baray sochti rahi sirshaar
> hoti rahi .wo to taqreeban poori bheeg hi chuki thi ke ammi nay kaha "
> Sna , abhi kay liyay bas karo " kisi aur ki baari anay do." usay tab
> ehsaas hoa ke usay to peechay khari ammi bhool hi gaey thin. wo
> sharmindigi say jaldi say peechay hat gaey.
>  bait -al haram say  mina jany lagay to bhi mur mur kay daikhti rahi .
> Haj kay tamam manasik ada hotay rahay  aur  wo bhooli bhatki si
> baykhaber si  jaisay  dunya bhool gaey ho. ammi dady  aur Arsalaan ki
> rah numaey na hoti to  jaisay usay kuch  soojhta hi na .maidaan
> Araafaat  main dhoop ki tamazet  main nidhaal si kaifiyat main usay
> mehsoos hoa  . khali maidaan  main kisi ala shaan emarat ka jadoo nahi
> hay , aur sooraj ki hararat main  rait kay zarray hain  ya kuch pather
> jo Allah ki tasbeeh biyan kartay hoay mehsoos ho rahy hain  . darakht
> aur insaan  main  abadat ka  aik jaisa  nasha tha jis kay agay Sna ko
>  kuch   dikhaey na  diya. kahan say peenay ko paani mil gaia  , aur
> kahaan say  khanay ko khauraak kisi ko koey sar-o-kaar hi nahi jaisay
> . Muzdalfa say  kankaryaan uthatay waqt  usay khiyal aaia ke ibadat
> kay is  hissay main kia lutf ho ga?
>  is sawal kay jawab main jab wo kankaryaan marnay gaey  to daikha ke
> jamaraat per kankaryaan aisay girrahi hain jaisay  chakki main say
> Aata . usay aur ammi ko Arsalaan aur dady  aik jaga khara kar kay  ,
> aga gaey aur  sab kay hissay  ki  kankaryaan maar kay aey . Sna ko
> ajeeb sa shauq jaga , neechay giri hoey kankaryaan utha kay wo us
> taraf  phainknay  lagi.
>
> ab tak ki saari  riazat  kay dauraan  usay neend ka ehsaas buhut kam
> hoa , usay lagta tha jaisay us ka dimagh soay hoay bhi jaag raha hay .
> Mina main qayam kay waqt albatta usay neend nay  a liya , thakan ka
> ehsaas jaga ye shaitaan  ko kankaryaan marnay kay baad  ka sakoon tha
> shaid . Eid kay din naha dho kay , qurbaani kay baad , sab nay aik
> doosray ko Haj ki mubarak di aur phir madeenay ki taraf chalay .
>  . tawaf al wida keh kay jab wo  rukhsat honay lagi to  jaisay sakoon
> ka lafz yahin chore kay ja rahi ho . wo ronay lagi , ansoon main usay
> yaad aaia ke itna to wo apni rukhsati kay waqt bhi nahi roey thi. usay
> apni ammi ki ankhoon ki wo chamak yaad aa gaey jis nay unhain apni
> baiti ki rukhsati bhula di thi. wo  ye soch kay muskaey aur shukranay
> ki dua mangaty hoay us nay Madeena munawara  say anay waali  hawa ko
> khushi say mehsoos kiya .
>
> masjid Nabwi ki hudood kab sharoo hoey Sna  ko nahi maloom albatta
> logoon kay bahao  main chalti hoey wo jahan tak ander ja sakti thi
> chalti gaey . thandi pursakoon fiza say jaisay thakay hoay hajyoon ka
> massag ho gai aho aur wo phir say tar-o- taza ho gaey hoon.
>  masjid nabwi ki  khoobsoorat naey tarz ki  wasee emarat  main hafta
> bhar namazain ada kin aur  rozana hi Us muqadas jaali ko daikhnay ki
> hasrat barhti gaey.  wahaan auratoon aur mardoon  ka elehda intezaam
> tha aur  ziyarat kay makhsoos auqaat thay .phir aik din asar ki namaz
> kay baad unhain mauqa mil hi gaia . wo sunherijalyoon ko daikhnay lagi
> aur nazer ander tak na janay kia dhoondhti rahi . wahaan darood -o-
> salaam  ka zikar tha charoon taraf . log duain kar rahay thay nawafil
> parh rahay thay . ammi kay kehnay pe nafal ada kiya aur darood parhany
> lagi . aik konay main wo baithi  logoon kay hujoom kay darmiyaan say
> jalyoon kay ander chaey hoay  sakoot  ko mehsoos karnay lagi . us nay
> ankhain band kar lin ke un kay kanoon main  peechay baithi aik khatoon
> ki hichkiyoon ki awaazain sunaey din. wo halka sa muri. ansoon say
> nahaia hoa chehra , dua mangtay hoay kamptay hoay hath . kamptay hoay
> alfaaz . us nay zara tairana nigah daali to saray alam ka yehi haal
> tha . girgiratay hoey . roti hoey . jholyaan aur daman phailey hoey ..
> mangti hoey dunya . us ka dil jaisay halaq main aa kay thehar gia ho.
> aik lamhay ko usay kuch nahi soojha ke wo kia mangay ...phir jaisay us
> ki ammi ki awaaz sunaey di " Sna dua mango. hum Allah miyan kay ghar
> phir say jain "  aur jaisay wo kam sin ban gaey ho aur hil hil kay
> yehi dua mangti gaey .usay yaad aaia ke  Khala bi Haj ki khawhish
> liyay hi dunya say rukhsat ho gaey thin . ...khala bi kay chehray kay
> saath usay kaey chehray yaad aa gaey  aur wo un kay liyay dua mangti
> gaey ...
>   madeenay ki pur- raunaq dukaonoon  say  khajoorain   aur tasbyaan
> khareedin  kuch aur masjidoon ki ziaratain kin aur  wapsi ki tayari
> hoey . Haj kay chand dinoo main hi wo dhair saari tabdeeli kay saath
> . wapas Jeddah aa gaey . jahaan say Zamzam ki saughaat liyay  Ammi aur
> dady kay saath Japan aa gaey.
>
> Yahaan sab ki mubarkain milin , zam zam aur khajoorain bantin . aur
> dawtain  khaein. kisi nay usay Hajan  kaha aur kisi nay khushqismat .
> Zindigi jaisay us ki ab sharoo hoey thi . namaz  ki pabandi kay saath
> us nay dunay ki nit naey taraqi yafta emaroon say mehzooz hona  chore
> diya tha   . wo aik qabil Architect thi ghar ko naey siray say muzayan
> kiya .us kay office  main ab  aik say barh kay aali shaan masajid kay
> posters thay  , yehi haal ghar ka bhi tha . masjid nabwi kay
> mukhtalif  zavyay haray balb ki roshni main ghar main dakhil hotay hi
> rah daari ki dewar pe tatreeb say lagay thay.   aur ghar kay darmiyaan
> .living  main  bait al haram ka nihayat hi  khoobsoorat  model tha .
> aur is kay elawa   aisa buhut kuch  tha  jin kay samany dunya jahaan
> ki Architecture ki dunya  hairaan aur mabhoot reh jati hay. aur kion
> na hoon akhir ye dunya per  azal say abad tak  zinda rehnay wali
> lazawaal  emartain hain .  jo ke kabhi dunya ka history nahi kehlain
> gi.
>
>  teen saal ka arsa guzra , Sna ki baiti  Eman chotay qadmoon say
> bhagti hoey aey aur maan kay braber baith kay , us ki taqleed main
> hil hil kay kuch mangny lagi . Sna nay us kay haath piyalay ki tarha
> banaey  aur kaha ke " Eman  ... mangoo ke hum Allah miyan kay ghar
> phir jain " ye keh kay Sna nay Eman ki hathaili  ko daikha ...aur
> halki si muskaan say  socha ke Allah karay  is kay haath main Haj ki
> lakeer zaroor  ho , amin.

a_rzoo@hotmail.com (arzoo) wrote in message
> Na qabil-e- faramosh
>
Arzoo Sahiba,

aap_kii kahanii pa.Dhii, bahut hii Khuub hai. ise pa.Dh kar mujhe to
aise mahsuus hua k aap Khud Haj kar ke aaii haiN, agar sach meiN aisaa
hai, to merii jaanib se mubaarak_baad qubuul kiijiiye. agar nahiiN, to
aap ke tassawur kii jitnii daad dii jaaye utnii kam hai.

ummiid hai k aaiNdaa bhii aap_kii kahaaniiaaN pa.Dhne ko miltii
raheNgii.

_______________Zoya

Adaab,

 Zoya Aap ki daad aur tehsen ka shukriya , is baar main nay to nahi,
albatta mairay waldain nay  kiya hay. un ki taraf say khair mubarak
.laikin inshallah  kabhi  na kabhi mairi baari bhi aey gi , aap dua
kijyay ga . Allah is baat ki sab ko taufeeq day . amin

 aap ki daad ka aik baar phir  teh-e- dil say shukriya .


zbirri@yahoo.com (Zoya) wrote in message news:<2e750db.0402140819.4b5cc40b@posting.google.com>...
> a_rzoo@hotmail.com (arzoo) wrote in message
> > Na qabil-e- faramosh
> >
> Arzoo Sahiba,
>
> aap_kii kahanii pa.Dhii, bahut hii Khuub hai. ise pa.Dh kar mujhe to
> aise mahsuus hua k aap Khud Haj kar ke aaii haiN, agar sach meiN aisaa
> hai, to merii jaanib se mubaarak_baad qubuul kiijiiye. agar nahiiN, to
> aap ke tassawur kii jitnii daad dii jaaye utnii kam hai.
>
> ummiid hai k aaiNdaa bhii aap_kii kahaaniiaaN pa.Dhne ko miltii
> raheNgii.
>
> _______________Zoya

Adaab jasho ,

 aap nay hamaisha ki tarha  itna tafseeli jaiza liyay aur achi raey di
. main bhi aap kay  parhnay aur" manzer " daikhnay waali aankh ko daad
daiti hoon .
 bay shak aap nay jo point uthaia  wo baja hay , sna kay waldain kay
sath kia hao ? aur us ki friend ka kia bana ? friend  ki shadi ho gaey
thi kahani main aur " waldain apnay waten main hi rahay. " haan mujhay
aisichoti si detail bata daini chahyay thi . to kill the curiousity .
aap nay sahee mairi ghalti  pakri.
 main ainda muhtaat rahoon gi.inshallah

 laikin in cheezoon ko danastan inore kiya , kioonke kahani ka asal
maqsad kuch aur tha .

 Aap ka buhut shukriya , itna tafseeli jawab diya , acha lagta hay jab
kahani  ka baghore jaiza  liya ho kisi nay , kam az kam likhnay ka haq
ada hota hay .

 umeed karti hoon ke ainda bhi aap ki raey  mairay liyay guidance
muhaya karay gi . aap ka buhut shukriya.

 arzoo


yashowanto@yahoo.com (Yashowanto N. Ghosh) wrote in message news:<efffb540.0402101559.2f01de25@posting.google.com>...
> Arzoo saahiba, aadaab arz!
>
> nayee kahaanee sunaane kaa bahut bahut shukriya!  maasha Allaah
> is baar bhee aap ne kyaa Khoob kahee hai---chhoTee see kahaanee
> meiN aik duniyaa basaa kar rakh dee :)  paRhte vaqt yooN lag
> rahaa thaa k tamaam vaaqi'aat aaNkhoN ke saamne ho rahe haiN...
> kahaanee kyaa hai, kisee film yaa Drame kaa asar rakhtee hai!!
>
> manzar-kashee, character development vGh. hasb e ma'amool Khoob
> haiN (mere kehne kaa matlab yeh hai k aa'inda ham aap kee
> tehreeroN par likhte vaqt in baatoN kee alag daad na deN
> ge---it is automatically understood that your stories will
> have these qualities! :)) ).
>
> qaabil e Ghaur hai k agarche kahaanee "third person" meiN kahee
> gayee hai, sirf aik kirdaar ke dimaaGhee Haalaat/Khayaalaat
> bayaan kiye gaye haiN (jaisaa k umooman "first person" meiN
> kiyaa jaataa hai).  is kaa asar bhee Khoob rahaa (aur mere
> Khayaal se yeh kaam aasaan na hogaa, so is ke liye mubaarak-baad!)
>
> chand aik "loose strings" reh gaye haiN---paRhne vaaloN ke zehn
> meiN shaayad yeh savaal reh jaayeN ge k Sana ke vaalidain kaa
> kyaa huaa aur Nida kaa kyaa huaa.  Khair yeh baat shaayad ziyaadah
> ma'yoob bhee naheeN.
>
> unvaan (thoRaa-saa hee sahee) khaTak rahaa hai.  "naa-qaabil e
> faraamosh" tarkeeb Khoob hai, aur kahaanee meiN jin vaaqi'aat
> kaa zikr hai voh yaqeenan naa-qaabil e faraamosh haiN, lekin
> shaayad pooree kahaanee ke liye is se behtar unvaan milnaa
> naa-mumkin naheeN ho gaa.
>
> With best regards, aap kee aglee behtareen kahaanee kaa muntazir,
>
> Jasho
>
> a_rzoo@hotmail.com (arzoo) wrote in message news:<8d4dca1d.0402101200.601949d4@posting.google.com>...
> > Na qabil-e- faramosh
> >
> >
> >   Choti si thi jab us ki ammi  us kay haathoon ka piyala bana kay
> > kehtin " dua mango hum Allah miyan kay ghar phir say  jain"  aur  wo
> > foran ankhain sakhti say meech kay hil hil kay is jumlay  ki gardaan
> > karnay lagti  ye janay baghair ke Allah miyan ka ghar kia hay ? kahaan
> >  hay? kaisa hay?
> >  paanch  saal ki umar main usay to bas itna maloom tha ke is naey
> > shehar main  us ki aik hi saheeli " gurya " thi jis ka ghar  waisa hi
> > sabz rang ka hay jaisa ke us ki man pasand frok ka .
> >
> >  thori bari hoey to kitab ho ya Tv jahaan bhi nazer ata Us ki ammi
> > foran kehtin " Sna  , ye daikho  ye hay Allah miyan ka ghar " wo  la
> > parwahi say tasweer ko daikh kay apni ammi  kay chehray ko daikhnay
> > lagti jahaan  na janay kia hota ke wo sochnay lagti ke us ki  ammi ko
> > ye ghar kitna  pasand hay , akhir kioon?
> >
> > waqt kay saath saath  is chotay say sawal main  aur buhut say sawaloon
> > ka izafa hota gaia , her saal anay wali Baqr Eid  pe  Haj aur Qurbani
> > kay alfaaz aur muhallay main kisi Haji kay anay ya janay ki khabrain
> > ,Aur  sab say barh kay , 9 zil haj ko us ki ammi ka TV  daikhnay ka
> > ishteyaaq , jaisay us kay ander tajasus aur shauq  ki chingaryaan
> > roshan karnay lagta.
> >
> > dasween kay imtehaan say farigh hoey to gurya kay saath mil kay
> > palmistry ka shauq  paal liya ,ab bas her aik ka hath paker kay baith
> > jaati . pehlay apna phir gurya ka phir ammi papa ka , phir saari class
> > main sab larkyoon ka , aur kartay kartay khandaan main mashhoor ho
> > gaey . apnay tak aur larkyoon tak shughal laganay ki baat to usay bari
> > pasand thi laikin jab bhi wo apni khala bi kay ghar jati wo aik hi
> > sawal kartin " Sna baiti, a zara daikh mairay hath main  Haj ki lakeer
> > hay ke nahi " us nay aaj tak kisi kitaab main Haj ki lakeer nahi parhi
> > thi laikin wo aisay hi natak kar kay keh daiti "haan khala bi buhut
> > bari lakeer hay Haj ki " aur phir khala bi  hath khainch laitin aur
> > pursakoon si ho jatin. khala bi  kay is sawal  ki waja say us nay kaey
> > kitabain chaanin laikin Haj ki lakeer kahin nahi mili . phir usay
> > apni khala bi ki tarha kaey log milay jo yehi sawal kartay " mairay
> > haath pe Haj ki  lakeer hay ?" us kay paas is ka jawaab kabhi na hota
> > . Haj ki lakeer  kay muamay say  tang aa kay us nay is shughal ko
> > khair baad keh diya .
> >
> > College main gaey to is jaisay dunya aur bhi  rangeen ho gaey , Allah
> > miyan kay ghar ki bajaey ab wo  hazaar tareekhi jaghoon aur dunya ki
> > bay shumaar  ala shaan emaratoon  kay baray main parhnay lagi .
> > imartoon kay isi shauq ki waja say  wo architecture  main masters
> > karna chahti thi , college kay trips ka silsila bhi  chalta raha  aur
> > saath hi saath us kay kamray ki deewarain mukhtalif emartoon  kay
> > posters say bharti rahin . aaj bhi wo abhi taj mehal ka khoobsoorat sa
> > poster laga rahi thi ke ammi ki awaz aey " Sna , gurya aey hay ."
> > jaldi say kursi say neechay utri ,  gurya kay anays say pehlay  aina
> > daikha aur kursi jagah per rakhtay hi , darwazay pe khari Nida ko
> > garam joshi say salam kiya aur kaha  " aray waah , aaj to eid kara di
> > tum nay " us nay galay miltay hoay kaha. " w , salaam . main nay socha
> > kabhi kabhi achanak bhi ana chahyay , ziada khushi hoti hay " Nida
> > baig maiz pe rakhtay hoay boli." to kia ho raha tha , " " aray wah
> > jaisay tum nay daikha hi nahi , ye daikho " us nay taj mehel kay
> > poster ki taraf  ishara kartay hoay kaha . " waao ...that's nice"
> > kahaan say mara hay ?"  Nida nay paas jatay hoay poocha ." maara nahi
> > yaar, khareeda hay pooray 75 rupay main" " maira khiyal hay ke dunya
> > main sirf 7 ujoobay hain laikin tumharay kamray main to hazaroon
> > ujooboon ki tasweerain lagi hain " Nida nay saray kamray ki deewaroon
> > per lagi , Eharaam-e- misr , Eiphel tower, Peica tower, WTC, Deewar-e-
> > cheen , Room aur Spain  ki purani  emartain, China Aur Pakistan ki
> > Dhair saari mashhoor-o- maroof emartoon ki choti bari  hazaroon
> > tasweeroon   per aik nazer dauratay hoay kaha . "Acha hay na kam az
> > kam tumharay bhaey jaan kay  saRay hoay shauq say acha hay na jinhoon
> > nay dunya bhar ki garyaan saja rakhi hain dewaroon pe" Sna nay ankh
> > martay hoay khushgawaar mood main kaha . "  Acha to kia tum un say
> > muqabla karti ho ""Nida nay maanee khaiz nazroon say daikhtay hoay
> > poocha ." main kahan , wo kartay hain mujh say muqabla " Sna nay
> > nazrain churatay hoay kaha aur saath hi poocha . " waisay japan ja kay
> > to buhut khush hoon gay  ab" Nida nay qadray udasi say jawaab diya  "
> > haan teen saal bad aein gay engeenering ki  degree mukamal kar kay "
> > Sna nay usay chutki kaati aur hanstay hoay kaha " Aur aik added brand
> > new  japani  gaari aur japani gurya  lay kay" aur  saath hi donoon
> > hansnay lagin.
> >
> > chaar saal ka arsa parhayi main . imtehanoon main aur  dunya  ki
> > emartoon ko  sarahatay hoay kab guzra Sna ko  pata bhi na laga . is
> > dauraan Nida  ki shadi ho gaey aur khud us ka nikah Nida kay bhaey
> > Arsalaan  kay saath  ho gaia aur ab do mah baad  wo rukhsat ho kay
> > halkay sabz rang kay man pasand  ghar main janay wali thi . wo apnay
> > kamray ki dewaroon per say  tasweerain utaar kay sanbhaal  kay rakh
> > rahi thi ke us ki ammi  nay daikha to poocha " Sna !! ye tum saath lay
> > jao gi kia" " haan ammi jaan ,, bhala ye main bhool sakti hoon ..maira
> > asaasa  hain ye"  us nay lambay say dibbay ko band kartay hoay kaha ."
> > tauba hay , bhala in emartoon main  Allah jany tumhain kia nazer ata
> > hay , wahan bhi ja kay  ye gand sajao gi  dewaroon pe " us ki ammi nay
> > nagawari say kaha . " ammi jaan aap ki baiti Architect hay koey mazaaq
> > nahi ...in kay baghair ab mairi  pehchaan nahi. " us nay  baray fakher
> > say kaha." acha tum pe to junoon sa sawaar hay , suna hay Japaan main
> > aur bhi khoobsoorat emartain hain ," us ki ammi nay sochtay hoay kaha
> > " haan ammi Arsalaan bata rahy thay , bas mujhay wahaan janay dain
> > phir daikhna kaisay kaisay design karoon gi " , " Acha tumharay  janay
> > kay baad hum  tumhari  chachi kay paas  Jeddah  ja rahay hain hain aur
> >  wahaan umray karain gay aur Haj  kar kay wapas aein gay " us ki ammi
> > nay  bari khushi say bataia . Sna nay ammi ki ankhoon main chamak
> > daikhi to sochnay lagi ke  ammi ko  mairi rukhsati ka koey dukh nahi
> > laikin Haj ki kitni khushi hay.laikin saath hi usay ye  baat
> > tasaleebakhs bhi lagi kam az kam ab usay ammi papa ki itni fikar nahi
> > rahy gi.
> >
> >  do maah baad rukhsat ho kay wo chand haftay Sabz ghar main rahi aur
> > phir Arsalaan  kay saath  japan   chali aey . yahaan sharoo kay  kaey
> > maheenay  wo arsalaan kay saath mukhtalif jaghain daikhti rahi  . phir
> > Arslaan ki company ki taraf say aik tour  main wo log Itally bhi gaey
> > aur France bhi .dunya ko daikhnay kay saath saath usay ammmi papa kay
> > phone atay rahay . " kabhi  Makkah  ki fizaoon kay baray , kabhi
> > khana kaaba ki tareef kartay hoay  aur kabhi madeenay raunaq kay
> > baray...wo sochti us kay seedhay saadhay  waldain  inhi do jaghoon ko
> > daikh kay itnay khush hain  yahaan aa kay aaj ki duyna ki taraqi
> > daikhain to shaid sab bhool jain.
> >
> >  Shadi kay doosray hi saal Arsalaan nay aik din  kaha " Sna , main
> > soch raha hoon is baar ammi dady ko Haj karwaoon ..tumhara kia khiyal
> > hay?" ...Haj kay naam pe jaisay ,,, wo sakit  si ho gaey , phir boli "
> > haan kioon nahi , mujhay kia aetraaz ho sakta hay " phir maiz pe  kisi
> >  naqshay  pe jhuk gaey. " mager  maira  khiyal hay ke  Hum bhi jain ,
> > mauqa bhi hay aur ammi dady  ko  company bhi rahay gi  " Arslaan nay
> > Sna  kay haath say  pencil pakartay hoay kaha. Sna  ko aik dam kuch na
> > soojha , khoey khoey si boli"  haan is say achi kia baat ho sakti hay
> > " .." bas phir tayari paker lo ", Arsalaan nay ghoom kay khushi say
> > kaha ... do mah baad  wo Haj ki saari tayaroon kay saath  jeddah
> > pohnchay jahan say Arsalan kay waldain ko saath liya  aur haj kay
> > liyay rawana hoay .Sna aur Arsalaan  nay Makkah  jatay hoay dhair
> > saari kitaboon ko parha . Ehraam   aur Haj  kay saray  arkaan ko
> > samjha  . aur  saas susar ki rahnumaey main  Allahumma labaik parhtay
> > hoay  hajyoon  ki saf main shamil hoay.
> >
> > Masjid al haram  say kaafi  pehlay  hi  sarak pe chaltay hoay itnay
> > rash aur hujoom main  Sna nay logoon kay chehroon  pe ajeeb sa junoon
> > daikha , jaisay  maqnatees lohay ko  khainchta hay usay laga , sab log
> > kahin khichay chalay ja rahay hain. Allahuma labaik ka wird kartay
> > hoay wo zameen ko daikh kay chalnay lagi  ke Arsalaan nay ishara kar
> > kay kaha "Sna ,samnay daikho" Sna  nay daikha ..sufaid marbal ki
> > phaili hoaey emarat  charoon taraf  hajyoon  ka hujoom aur  fiza main
> > " Allahuma labaik kay wird  kay jadoo main laal choocnhoon walay mast
> > kabooter , us kay rongattay kharay ho gaey aur   qadam ruk gaey,
> > bait-Allah  main usay buhut  pehlay hi Allah ka jalaal aur shaan ander
> > tak mehsoos hoey   .Arsalaan nay us ka haath dady ko thamaia aur khud
> > apni ammi ka hath paker liya . Bait-al haram main dakhil hoay  to
> > jaisay logoon ka  sailaab beh raha ho  Sna  ki nazer  jaisay jhapakna
> > bhool gaey us kay samnay  khana kaabah  tha . kalay rang kay ghulaaf
> > main  dhaka hoa , khoobsoorat  Ayaat say muzayan , us ka dimaghjaisay
> > shal sa ho gaia ho , usay nahi yaad kab Dady nay  usay paker kay
> > chalatay hoay tawaf main ghaseet liya. phir jaisay  us  sailab main wo
> > behnay lagi , dady nay usay yaad karaia ke tawaaf  main kia tasbeeh
> > karni hay . laikin us ki nazer markaz say na hat saki . hajr-e- aswad
> > kay samnay dady  kay kehnay pe  takbeer -e- tehreema kahi  aur phir
> > usi markez kay gird behnay lagi . usay nahi yaad zameen pe qadam lagay
> > ke nahi ? kitna fasla tay hoa ? kaisay hoa? bas aik ajeeb si baykhudi
> > si thi jis main say her baar dady  ko usay nikalna parta . aur aglay
> > rukan kay  liyay samjhana parta .
> > muqam-e- ibraheem  kay baray bhi dady nay usay bataia warna usay to
> > yaad na rehta .
> >
> > tawaf  kay baad saee kartay waqt bhi us ki nazer behak  kay  markaz pe
> > par jaati . too palatna bhool jaati . saee kay baad  wo ammi kay saath
> > Zam zam ki taraf gaey . pehlay piyas bhujhaey phir zaiq mehsoos kiya
> > to usay laga ke nazer to paani ata hay  laikin paani mehsoos kioon
> > nahi hota . koey nabeena aurat ankhoon pe laga rahi hay to koey apnay
> > bachy kay sir pe daal rahi hay . usay aik aik nal kay peechay
> > khawateen ki qatarain nazer ain . aik lamhay ko us nay socha lakhoon
> > ki taadaad main Haj aur aik Zam zam ka Kunwaan . aur phir hazaroon
> > saal purana . us kay rongattay phir kharay hoay . dimagh shal sa hoa
> > aur wo pagaloon ki tarah Zam zam  kay paani kay cheentay monh pe
> > dalnay lagi. wo jaisay jaisay paani kay baray sochti rahi sirshaar
> > hoti rahi .wo to taqreeban poori bheeg hi chuki thi ke ammi nay kaha "
> > Sna , abhi kay liyay bas karo " kisi aur ki baari anay do." usay tab
> > ehsaas hoa ke usay to peechay khari ammi bhool hi gaey thin. wo
> > sharmindigi say jaldi say peechay hat gaey.
> >  bait -al haram say  mina jany lagay to bhi mur mur kay daikhti rahi .
> > Haj kay tamam manasik ada hotay rahay  aur  wo bhooli bhatki si
> > baykhaber si  jaisay  dunya bhool gaey ho. ammi dady  aur Arsalaan ki
> > rah numaey na hoti to  jaisay usay kuch  soojhta hi na .maidaan
> > Araafaat  main dhoop ki tamazet  main nidhaal si kaifiyat main usay
> > mehsoos hoa  . khali maidaan  main kisi ala shaan emarat ka jadoo nahi
> > hay , aur sooraj ki hararat main  rait kay zarray hain  ya kuch pather
> > jo Allah ki tasbeeh biyan kartay hoay mehsoos ho rahy hain  . darakht
> > aur insaan  main  abadat ka  aik jaisa  nasha tha jis kay agay Sna ko
> >  kuch   dikhaey na  diya. kahan say peenay ko paani mil gaia  , aur
> > kahaan say  khanay ko khauraak kisi ko koey sar-o-kaar hi nahi jaisay
> > . Muzdalfa say  kankaryaan uthatay waqt  usay khiyal aaia ke ibadat
> > kay is  hissay main kia lutf ho ga?
> >  is sawal kay jawab main jab wo kankaryaan marnay gaey  to daikha ke
> > jamaraat per kankaryaan aisay girrahi hain jaisay  chakki main say
> > Aata . usay aur ammi ko Arsalaan aur dady  aik jaga khara kar kay  ,
> > aga gaey aur  sab kay hissay  ki  kankaryaan maar kay aey . Sna ko
> > ajeeb sa shauq jaga , neechay giri hoey kankaryaan utha kay wo us
> > taraf  phainknay  lagi.
> >
> > ab tak ki saari  riazat  kay dauraan  usay neend ka ehsaas buhut kam
> > hoa , usay lagta tha jaisay us ka dimagh soay hoay bhi jaag raha hay .
> > Mina main qayam kay waqt albatta usay neend nay  a liya , thakan ka
> > ehsaas jaga ye shaitaan  ko kankaryaan marnay kay baad  ka sakoon tha
> > shaid . Eid kay din naha dho kay , qurbaani kay baad , sab nay aik
> > doosray ko Haj ki mubarak di aur phir madeenay ki taraf chalay .
> >  . tawaf al wida keh kay jab wo  rukhsat honay lagi to  jaisay sakoon
> > ka lafz yahin chore kay ja rahi ho . wo ronay lagi , ansoon main usay
> > yaad aaia ke itna to wo apni rukhsati kay waqt bhi nahi roey thi. usay
> > apni ammi ki ankhoon ki wo chamak yaad aa gaey jis nay unhain apni
> > baiti ki rukhsati bhula di thi. wo  ye soch kay muskaey aur shukranay
> > ki dua mangaty hoay us nay Madeena munawara  say anay waali  hawa ko
> > khushi say mehsoos kiya .
> >
> > masjid Nabwi ki hudood kab sharoo hoey Sna  ko nahi maloom albatta
> > logoon kay bahao  main chalti hoey wo jahan tak ander ja sakti thi
> > chalti gaey . thandi pursakoon fiza say jaisay thakay hoay hajyoon ka
> > massag ho gai aho aur wo phir say tar-o- taza ho gaey hoon.
> >  masjid nabwi ki  khoobsoorat naey tarz ki  wasee emarat  main hafta
> > bhar namazain ada kin aur  rozana hi Us muqadas jaali ko daikhnay ki
> > hasrat barhti gaey.  wahaan auratoon aur mardoon  ka elehda intezaam
> > tha aur  ziyarat kay makhsoos auqaat thay .phir aik din asar ki namaz
> > kay baad unhain mauqa mil hi gaia . wo sunherijalyoon ko daikhnay lagi
> > aur nazer ander tak na janay kia dhoondhti rahi . wahaan darood -o-
> > salaam  ka zikar tha charoon taraf . log duain kar rahay thay nawafil
> > parh rahay thay . ammi kay kehnay pe nafal ada kiya aur darood parhany
> > lagi . aik konay main wo baithi  logoon kay hujoom kay darmiyaan say
> > jalyoon kay ander chaey hoay  sakoot  ko mehsoos karnay lagi . us nay
> > ankhain band kar lin ke un kay kanoon main  peechay baithi aik khatoon
> > ki hichkiyoon ki awaazain sunaey din. wo halka sa muri. ansoon say
> > nahaia hoa chehra , dua mangtay hoay kamptay hoay hath . kamptay hoay
> > alfaaz . us nay zara tairana nigah daali to saray alam ka yehi haal
> > tha . girgiratay hoey . roti hoey . jholyaan aur daman phailey hoey ..
> > mangti hoey dunya . us ka dil jaisay halaq main aa kay thehar gia ho.
> > aik lamhay ko usay kuch nahi soojha ke wo kia mangay ...phir jaisay us
> > ki ammi ki awaaz sunaey di " Sna dua mango. hum Allah miyan kay ghar
> > phir say jain "  aur jaisay wo kam sin ban gaey ho aur hil hil kay
> > yehi dua mangti gaey .usay yaad aaia ke  Khala bi Haj ki khawhish
> > liyay hi dunya say rukhsat ho gaey thin . ...khala bi kay chehray kay
> > saath usay kaey chehray yaad aa gaey  aur wo un kay liyay dua mangti
> > gaey ...
> >   madeenay ki pur- raunaq dukaonoon  say  khajoorain   aur tasbyaan
> > khareedin  kuch aur masjidoon ki ziaratain kin aur  wapsi ki tayari
> > hoey . Haj kay chand dinoo main hi wo dhair saari tabdeeli kay saath
> > . wapas Jeddah aa gaey . jahaan say Zamzam ki saughaat liyay  Ammi aur
> > dady kay saath Japan aa gaey.
> >
> > Yahaan sab ki mubarkain milin , zam zam aur khajoorain bantin . aur
> > dawtain  khaein. kisi nay usay Hajan  kaha aur kisi nay khushqismat .
> > Zindigi jaisay us ki ab sharoo hoey thi . namaz  ki pabandi kay saath
> > us nay dunay ki nit naey taraqi yafta emaroon say mehzooz hona  chore
> > diya tha   . wo aik qabil Architect thi ghar ko naey siray say muzayan
> > kiya .us kay office  main ab  aik say barh kay aali shaan masajid kay
> > posters thay  , yehi haal ghar ka bhi tha . masjid nabwi kay
> > mukhtalif  zavyay haray balb ki roshni main ghar main dakhil hotay hi
> > rah daari ki dewar pe tatreeb say lagay thay.   aur ghar kay darmiyaan
> > .living  main  bait al haram ka nihayat hi  khoobsoorat  model tha .
> > aur is kay elawa   aisa buhut kuch  tha  jin kay samany dunya jahaan
> > ki Architecture ki dunya  hairaan aur mabhoot reh jati hay. aur kion
> > na hoon akhir ye dunya per  azal say abad tak  zinda rehnay wali
> > lazawaal  emartain hain .  jo ke kabhi dunya ka history nahi kehlain
> > gi.
> >
> >  teen saal ka arsa guzra , Sna ki baiti  Eman chotay qadmoon say
> > bhagti hoey aey aur maan kay braber baith kay , us ki taqleed main
> > hil hil kay kuch mangny lagi . Sna nay us kay haath piyalay ki tarha
> > banaey  aur kaha ke " Eman  ... mangoo ke hum Allah miyan kay ghar
> > phir jain " ye keh kay Sna nay Eman ki hathaili  ko daikha ...aur
> > halki si muskaan say  socha ke Allah karay  is kay haath main Haj ki
> > lakeer zaroor  ho , amin.

On Wednesday, February 11, 2004 at 1:00:07 AM UTC+5, arzoo wrote:
> Na qabil-e- faramosh
>
>
>   Choti si thi jab us ki ammi  us kay haathoon ka piyala bana kay
> kehtin " dua mango hum Allah miyan kay ghar phir say  jain"  aur  wo
> foran ankhain sakhti say meech kay hil hil kay is jumlay  ki gardaan
> karnay lagti  ye janay baghair ke Allah miyan ka ghar kia hay ? kahaan
>  hay? kaisa hay?
>  paanch  saal ki umar main usay to bas itna maloom tha ke is naey
> shehar main  us ki aik hi saheeli " gurya " thi jis ka ghar  waisa hi
> sabz rang ka hay jaisa ke us ki man pasand frok ka .
>
>  thori bari hoey to kitab ho ya Tv jahaan bhi nazer ata Us ki ammi
> foran kehtin " Sna  , ye daikho  ye hay Allah miyan ka ghar " wo  la
> parwahi say tasweer ko daikh kay apni ammi  kay chehray ko daikhnay
> lagti jahaan  na janay kia hota ke wo sochnay lagti ke us ki  ammi ko
> ye ghar kitna  pasand hay , akhir kioon?
>
> waqt kay saath saath  is chotay say sawal main  aur buhut say sawaloon
> ka izafa hota gaia , her saal anay wali Baqr Eid  pe  Haj aur Qurbani
> kay alfaaz aur muhallay main kisi Haji kay anay ya janay ki khabrain
> ,Aur  sab say barh kay , 9 zil haj ko us ki ammi ka TV  daikhnay ka
> ishteyaaq , jaisay us kay ander tajasus aur shauq  ki chingaryaan
> roshan karnay lagta.
>
> dasween kay imtehaan say farigh hoey to gurya kay saath mil kay
> palmistry ka shauq  paal liya ,ab bas her aik ka hath paker kay baith
> jaati . pehlay apna phir gurya ka phir ammi papa ka , phir saari class
> main sab larkyoon ka , aur kartay kartay khandaan main mashhoor ho
> gaey . apnay tak aur larkyoon tak shughal laganay ki baat to usay bari
> pasand thi laikin jab bhi wo apni khala bi kay ghar jati wo aik hi
> sawal kartin " Sna baiti, a zara daikh mairay hath main  Haj ki lakeer
> hay ke nahi " us nay aaj tak kisi kitaab main Haj ki lakeer nahi parhi
> thi laikin wo aisay hi natak kar kay keh daiti "haan khala bi buhut
> bari lakeer hay Haj ki " aur phir khala bi  hath khainch laitin aur
> pursakoon si ho jatin. khala bi  kay is sawal  ki waja say us nay kaey
> kitabain chaanin laikin Haj ki lakeer kahin nahi mili . phir usay
> apni khala bi ki tarha kaey log milay jo yehi sawal kartay " mairay
> haath pe Haj ki  lakeer hay ?" us kay paas is ka jawaab kabhi na hota
> . Haj ki lakeer  kay muamay say  tang aa kay us nay is shughal ko
> khair baad keh diya .
>
> College main gaey to is jaisay dunya aur bhi  rangeen ho gaey , Allah
> miyan kay ghar ki bajaey ab wo  hazaar tareekhi jaghoon aur dunya ki
> bay shumaar  ala shaan emaratoon  kay baray main parhnay lagi .
> imartoon kay isi shauq ki waja say  wo architecture  main masters
> karna chahti thi , college kay trips ka silsila bhi  chalta raha  aur
> saath hi saath us kay kamray ki deewarain mukhtalif emartoon  kay
> posters say bharti rahin . aaj bhi wo abhi taj mehal ka khoobsoorat sa
> poster laga rahi thi ke ammi ki awaz aey " Sna , gurya aey hay ."
> jaldi say kursi say neechay utri ,  gurya kay anays say pehlay  aina
> daikha aur kursi jagah per rakhtay hi , darwazay pe khari Nida ko
> garam joshi say salam kiya aur kaha  " aray waah , aaj to eid kara di
> tum nay " us nay galay miltay hoay kaha. " w , salaam . main nay socha
> kabhi kabhi achanak bhi ana chahyay , ziada khushi hoti hay " Nida
> baig maiz pe rakhtay hoay boli." to kia ho raha tha , " " aray wah
> jaisay tum nay daikha hi nahi , ye daikho " us nay taj mehel kay
> poster ki taraf  ishara kartay hoay kaha . " waao ...that's nice"
> kahaan say mara hay ?"  Nida nay paas jatay hoay poocha ." maara nahi
> yaar, khareeda hay pooray 75 rupay main" " maira khiyal hay ke dunya
> main sirf 7 ujoobay hain laikin tumharay kamray main to hazaroon
> ujooboon ki tasweerain lagi hain " Nida nay saray kamray ki deewaroon
> per lagi , Eharaam-e- misr , Eiphel tower, Peica tower, WTC, Deewar-e-
> cheen , Room aur Spain  ki purani  emartain, China Aur Pakistan ki
> Dhair saari mashhoor-o- maroof emartoon ki choti bari  hazaroon
> tasweeroon   per aik nazer dauratay hoay kaha . "Acha hay na kam az
> kam tumharay bhaey jaan kay  saRay hoay shauq say acha hay na jinhoon
> nay dunya bhar ki garyaan saja rakhi hain dewaroon pe" Sna nay ankh
> martay hoay khushgawaar mood main kaha . "  Acha to kia tum un say
> muqabla karti ho ""Nida nay maanee khaiz nazroon say daikhtay hoay
> poocha ." main kahan , wo kartay hain mujh say muqabla " Sna nay
> nazrain churatay hoay kaha aur saath hi poocha . " waisay japan ja kay
> to buhut khush hoon gay  ab" Nida nay qadray udasi say jawaab diya  "
> haan teen saal bad aein gay engeenering ki  degree mukamal kar kay "
> Sna nay usay chutki kaati aur hanstay hoay kaha " Aur aik added brand
> new  japani  gaari aur japani gurya  lay kay" aur  saath hi donoon
> hansnay lagin.
>
> chaar saal ka arsa parhayi main . imtehanoon main aur  dunya  ki
> emartoon ko  sarahatay hoay kab guzra Sna ko  pata bhi na laga . is
> dauraan Nida  ki shadi ho gaey aur khud us ka nikah Nida kay bhaey
> Arsalaan  kay saath  ho gaia aur ab do mah baad  wo rukhsat ho kay
> halkay sabz rang kay man pasand  ghar main janay wali thi . wo apnay
> kamray ki dewaroon per say  tasweerain utaar kay sanbhaal  kay rakh
> rahi thi ke us ki ammi  nay daikha to poocha " Sna !! ye tum saath lay
> jao gi kia" " haan ammi jaan ,, bhala ye main bhool sakti hoon ..maira
> asaasa  hain ye"  us nay lambay say dibbay ko band kartay hoay kaha ."
> tauba hay , bhala in emartoon main  Allah jany tumhain kia nazer ata
> hay , wahan bhi ja kay  ye gand sajao gi  dewaroon pe " us ki ammi nay
> nagawari say kaha . " ammi jaan aap ki baiti Architect hay koey mazaaq
> nahi ...in kay baghair ab mairi  pehchaan nahi. " us nay  baray fakher
> say kaha." acha tum pe to junoon sa sawaar hay , suna hay Japaan main
> aur bhi khoobsoorat emartain hain ," us ki ammi nay sochtay hoay kaha
> " haan ammi Arsalaan bata rahy thay , bas mujhay wahaan janay dain
> phir daikhna kaisay kaisay design karoon gi " , " Acha tumharay  janay
> kay baad hum  tumhari  chachi kay paas  Jeddah  ja rahay hain hain aur
>  wahaan umray karain gay aur Haj  kar kay wapas aein gay " us ki ammi
> nay  bari khushi say bataia . Sna nay ammi ki ankhoon main chamak
> daikhi to sochnay lagi ke  ammi ko  mairi rukhsati ka koey dukh nahi
> laikin Haj ki kitni khushi hay.laikin saath hi usay ye  baat
> tasaleebakhs bhi lagi kam az kam ab usay ammi papa ki itni fikar nahi
> rahy gi.
>
>  do maah baad rukhsat ho kay wo chand haftay Sabz ghar main rahi aur
> phir Arsalaan  kay saath  japan   chali aey . yahaan sharoo kay  kaey
> maheenay  wo arsalaan kay saath mukhtalif jaghain daikhti rahi  . phir
> Arslaan ki company ki taraf say aik tour  main wo log Itally bhi gaey
> aur France bhi .dunya ko daikhnay kay saath saath usay ammmi papa kay
> phone atay rahay . " kabhi  Makkah  ki fizaoon kay baray , kabhi
> khana kaaba ki tareef kartay hoay  aur kabhi madeenay raunaq kay
> baray...wo sochti us kay seedhay saadhay  waldain  inhi do jaghoon ko
> daikh kay itnay khush hain  yahaan aa kay aaj ki duyna ki taraqi
> daikhain to shaid sab bhool jain.
>
>  Shadi kay doosray hi saal Arsalaan nay aik din  kaha " Sna , main
> soch raha hoon is baar ammi dady ko Haj karwaoon ..tumhara kia khiyal
> hay?" ...Haj kay naam pe jaisay ,,, wo sakit  si ho gaey , phir boli "
> haan kioon nahi , mujhay kia aetraaz ho sakta hay " phir maiz pe  kisi
>  naqshay  pe jhuk gaey. " mager  maira  khiyal hay ke  Hum bhi jain ,
> mauqa bhi hay aur ammi dady  ko  company bhi rahay gi  " Arslaan nay
> Sna  kay haath say  pencil pakartay hoay kaha. Sna  ko aik dam kuch na
> soojha , khoey khoey si boli"  haan is say achi kia baat ho sakti hay
> " .." bas phir tayari paker lo ", Arsalaan nay ghoom kay khushi say
> kaha ... do mah baad  wo Haj ki saari tayaroon kay saath  jeddah
> pohnchay jahan say Arsalan kay waldain ko saath liya  aur haj kay
> liyay rawana hoay .Sna aur Arsalaan  nay Makkah  jatay hoay dhair
> saari kitaboon ko parha . Ehraam   aur Haj  kay saray  arkaan ko
> samjha  . aur  saas susar ki rahnumaey main  Allahumma labaik parhtay
> hoay  hajyoon  ki saf main shamil hoay.
>
> Masjid al haram  say kaafi  pehlay  hi  sarak pe chaltay hoay itnay
> rash aur hujoom main  Sna nay logoon kay chehroon  pe ajeeb sa junoon
> daikha , jaisay  maqnatees lohay ko  khainchta hay usay laga , sab log
> kahin khichay chalay ja rahay hain. Allahuma labaik ka wird kartay
> hoay wo zameen ko daikh kay chalnay lagi  ke Arsalaan nay ishara kar
> kay kaha "Sna ,samnay daikho" Sna  nay daikha ..sufaid marbal ki
> phaili hoaey emarat  charoon taraf  hajyoon  ka hujoom aur  fiza main
> " Allahuma labaik kay wird  kay jadoo main laal choocnhoon walay mast
> kabooter , us kay rongattay kharay ho gaey aur   qadam ruk gaey,
> bait-Allah  main usay buhut  pehlay hi Allah ka jalaal aur shaan ander
> tak mehsoos hoey   .Arsalaan nay us ka haath dady ko thamaia aur khud
> apni ammi ka hath paker liya . Bait-al haram main dakhil hoay  to
> jaisay logoon ka  sailaab beh raha ho  Sna  ki nazer  jaisay jhapakna
> bhool gaey us kay samnay  khana kaabah  tha . kalay rang kay ghulaaf
> main  dhaka hoa , khoobsoorat  Ayaat say muzayan , us ka dimaghjaisay
> shal sa ho gaia ho , usay nahi yaad kab Dady nay  usay paker kay
> chalatay hoay tawaf main ghaseet liya. phir jaisay  us  sailab main wo
> behnay lagi , dady nay usay yaad karaia ke tawaaf  main kia tasbeeh
> karni hay . laikin us ki nazer markaz say na hat saki . hajr-e- aswad
> kay samnay dady  kay kehnay pe  takbeer -e- tehreema kahi  aur phir
> usi markez kay gird behnay lagi . usay nahi yaad zameen pe qadam lagay
> ke nahi ? kitna fasla tay hoa ? kaisay hoa? bas aik ajeeb si baykhudi
> si thi jis main say her baar dady  ko usay nikalna parta . aur aglay
> rukan kay  liyay samjhana parta .
> muqam-e- ibraheem  kay baray bhi dady nay usay bataia warna usay to
> yaad na rehta .
>
> tawaf  kay baad saee kartay waqt bhi us ki nazer behak  kay  markaz pe
> par jaati . too palatna bhool jaati . saee kay baad  wo ammi kay saath
> Zam zam ki taraf gaey . pehlay piyas bhujhaey phir zaiq mehsoos kiya
> to usay laga ke nazer to paani ata hay  laikin paani mehsoos kioon
> nahi hota . koey nabeena aurat ankhoon pe laga rahi hay to koey apnay
> bachy kay sir pe daal rahi hay . usay aik aik nal kay peechay
> khawateen ki qatarain nazer ain . aik lamhay ko us nay socha lakhoon
> ki taadaad main Haj aur aik Zam zam ka Kunwaan . aur phir hazaroon
> saal purana . us kay rongattay phir kharay hoay . dimagh shal sa hoa
> aur wo pagaloon ki tarah Zam zam  kay paani kay cheentay monh pe
> dalnay lagi. wo jaisay jaisay paani kay baray sochti rahi sirshaar
> hoti rahi .wo to taqreeban poori bheeg hi chuki thi ke ammi nay kaha "
> Sna , abhi kay liyay bas karo " kisi aur ki baari anay do." usay tab
> ehsaas hoa ke usay to peechay khari ammi bhool hi gaey thin. wo
> sharmindigi say jaldi say peechay hat gaey.
>  bait -al haram say  mina jany lagay to bhi mur mur kay daikhti rahi .
> Haj kay tamam manasik ada hotay rahay  aur  wo bhooli bhatki si
> baykhaber si  jaisay  dunya bhool gaey ho. ammi dady  aur Arsalaan ki
> rah numaey na hoti to  jaisay usay kuch  soojhta hi na .maidaan
> Araafaat  main dhoop ki tamazet  main nidhaal si kaifiyat main usay
> mehsoos hoa  . khali maidaan  main kisi ala shaan emarat ka jadoo nahi
> hay , aur sooraj ki hararat main  rait kay zarray hain  ya kuch pather
> jo Allah ki tasbeeh biyan kartay hoay mehsoos ho rahy hain  . darakht
> aur insaan  main  abadat ka  aik jaisa  nasha tha jis kay agay Sna ko
>  kuch   dikhaey na  diya. kahan say peenay ko paani mil gaia  , aur
> kahaan say  khanay ko khauraak kisi ko koey sar-o-kaar hi nahi jaisay
> . Muzdalfa say  kankaryaan uthatay waqt  usay khiyal aaia ke ibadat
> kay is  hissay main kia lutf ho ga?
>  is sawal kay jawab main jab wo kankaryaan marnay gaey  to daikha ke
> jamaraat per kankaryaan aisay girrahi hain jaisay  chakki main say
> Aata . usay aur ammi ko Arsalaan aur dady  aik jaga khara kar kay  ,
> aga gaey aur  sab kay hissay  ki  kankaryaan maar kay aey . Sna ko
> ajeeb sa shauq jaga , neechay giri hoey kankaryaan utha kay wo us
> taraf  phainknay  lagi.
>
> ab tak ki saari  riazat  kay dauraan  usay neend ka ehsaas buhut kam
> hoa , usay lagta tha jaisay us ka dimagh soay hoay bhi jaag raha hay .
> Mina main qayam kay waqt albatta usay neend nay  a liya , thakan ka
> ehsaas jaga ye shaitaan  ko kankaryaan marnay kay baad  ka sakoon tha
> shaid . Eid kay din naha dho kay , qurbaani kay baad , sab nay aik
> doosray ko Haj ki mubarak di aur phir madeenay ki taraf chalay .
>  . tawaf al wida keh kay jab wo  rukhsat honay lagi to  jaisay sakoon
> ka lafz yahin chore kay ja rahi ho . wo ronay lagi , ansoon main usay
> yaad aaia ke itna to wo apni rukhsati kay waqt bhi nahi roey thi. usay
> apni ammi ki ankhoon ki wo chamak yaad aa gaey jis nay unhain apni
> baiti ki rukhsati bhula di thi. wo  ye soch kay muskaey aur shukranay
> ki dua mangaty hoay us nay Madeena munawara  say anay waali  hawa ko
> khushi say mehsoos kiya .
>
> masjid Nabwi ki hudood kab sharoo hoey Sna  ko nahi maloom albatta
> logoon kay bahao  main chalti hoey wo jahan tak ander ja sakti thi
> chalti gaey . thandi pursakoon fiza say jaisay thakay hoay hajyoon ka
> massag ho gai aho aur wo phir say tar-o- taza ho gaey hoon.
>  masjid nabwi ki  khoobsoorat naey tarz ki  wasee emarat  main hafta
> bhar namazain ada kin aur  rozana hi Us muqadas jaali ko daikhnay ki
> hasrat barhti gaey.  wahaan auratoon aur mardoon  ka elehda intezaam
> tha aur  ziyarat kay makhsoos auqaat thay .phir aik din asar ki namaz
> kay baad unhain mauqa mil hi gaia . wo sunherijalyoon ko daikhnay lagi
> aur nazer ander tak na janay kia dhoondhti rahi . wahaan darood -o-
> salaam  ka zikar tha charoon taraf . log duain kar rahay thay nawafil
> parh rahay thay . ammi kay kehnay pe nafal ada kiya aur darood parhany
> lagi . aik konay main wo baithi  logoon kay hujoom kay darmiyaan say
> jalyoon kay ander chaey hoay  sakoot  ko mehsoos karnay lagi . us nay
> ankhain band kar lin ke un kay kanoon main  peechay baithi aik khatoon
> ki hichkiyoon ki awaazain sunaey din. wo halka sa muri. ansoon say
> nahaia hoa chehra , dua mangtay hoay kamptay hoay hath . kamptay hoay
> alfaaz . us nay zara tairana nigah daali to saray alam ka yehi haal
> tha . girgiratay hoey . roti hoey . jholyaan aur daman phailey hoey ..
> mangti hoey dunya . us ka dil jaisay halaq main aa kay thehar gia ho.
> aik lamhay ko usay kuch nahi soojha ke wo kia mangay ...phir jaisay us
> ki ammi ki awaaz sunaey di " Sna dua mango. hum Allah miyan kay ghar
> phir say jain "  aur jaisay wo kam sin ban gaey ho aur hil hil kay
> yehi dua mangti gaey .usay yaad aaia ke  Khala bi Haj ki khawhish
> liyay hi dunya say rukhsat ho gaey thin . ...khala bi kay chehray kay
> saath usay kaey chehray yaad aa gaey  aur wo un kay liyay dua mangti
> gaey ...
>   madeenay ki pur- raunaq dukaonoon  say  khajoorain   aur tasbyaan
> khareedin  kuch aur masjidoon ki ziaratain kin aur  wapsi ki tayari
> hoey . Haj kay chand dinoo main hi wo dhair saari tabdeeli kay saath
> . wapas Jeddah aa gaey . jahaan say Zamzam ki saughaat liyay  Ammi aur
> dady kay saath Japan aa gaey.
>
> Yahaan sab ki mubarkain milin , zam zam aur khajoorain bantin . aur
> dawtain  khaein. kisi nay usay Hajan  kaha aur kisi nay khushqismat .
> Zindigi jaisay us ki ab sharoo hoey thi . namaz  ki pabandi kay saath
> us nay dunay ki nit naey taraqi yafta emaroon say mehzooz hona  chore
> diya tha   . wo aik qabil Architect thi ghar ko naey siray say muzayan
> kiya .us kay office  main ab  aik say barh kay aali shaan masajid kay
> posters thay  , yehi haal ghar ka bhi tha . masjid nabwi kay
> mukhtalif  zavyay haray balb ki roshni main ghar main dakhil hotay hi
> rah daari ki dewar pe tatreeb say lagay thay.   aur ghar kay darmiyaan
> .living  main  bait al haram ka nihayat hi  khoobsoorat  model tha .
> aur is kay elawa   aisa buhut kuch  tha  jin kay samany dunya jahaan
> ki Architecture ki dunya  hairaan aur mabhoot reh jati hay. aur kion
> na hoon akhir ye dunya per  azal say abad tak  zinda rehnay wali
> lazawaal  emartain hain .  jo ke kabhi dunya ka history nahi kehlain
> gi.
>
>  teen saal ka arsa guzra , Sna ki baiti  Eman chotay qadmoon say
> bhagti hoey aey aur maan kay braber baith kay , us ki taqleed main
> hil hil kay kuch mangny lagi . Sna nay us kay haath piyalay ki tarha
> banaey  aur kaha ke " Eman  ... mangoo ke hum Allah miyan kay ghar
> phir jain " ye keh kay Sna nay Eman ki hathaili  ko daikha ...aur
> halki si muskaan say  socha ke Allah karay  is kay haath main Haj ki
> lakeer zaroor  ho , amin.

On Friday, April 27, 2018 at 10:56:00 PM UTC-7, jala...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Wednesday, February 11, 2004 at 1:00:07 AM UTC+5, arzoo wrote:
> > Na qabil-e- faramosh
> >
> >
> > Choti si thi jab us ki ammi us kay haathoon ka piyala bana kay
> > kehtin " dua mango hum Allah miyan kay ghar phir say jain" aur wo
> > foran ankhain sakhti say meech kay hil hil kay is jumlay ki gardaan
> > karnay lagti ye janay baghair ke Allah miyan ka ghar kia hay ? kahaan
> > hay? kaisa hay?
> > paanch saal ki umar main usay to bas itna maloom tha ke is naey
> > shehar main us ki aik hi saheeli " gurya " thi jis ka ghar waisa hi
> > sabz rang ka hay jaisa ke us ki man pasand frok ka .
> >
> > thori bari hoey to kitab ho ya Tv jahaan bhi nazer ata Us ki ammi
> > foran kehtin " Sna , ye daikho ye hay Allah miyan ka ghar " wo la
> > parwahi say tasweer ko daikh kay apni ammi kay chehray ko daikhnay
> > lagti jahaan na janay kia hota ke wo sochnay lagti ke us ki ammi ko
> > ye ghar kitna pasand hay , akhir kioon?
> >
> > waqt kay saath saath is chotay say sawal main aur buhut say sawaloon
> > ka izafa hota gaia , her saal anay wali Baqr Eid pe Haj aur Qurbani
> > kay alfaaz aur muhallay main kisi Haji kay anay ya janay ki khabrain
> > ,Aur sab say barh kay , 9 zil haj ko us ki ammi ka TV daikhnay ka
> > ishteyaaq , jaisay us kay ander tajasus aur shauq ki chingaryaan
> > roshan karnay lagta.
> >
> > dasween kay imtehaan say farigh hoey to gurya kay saath mil kay
> > palmistry ka shauq paal liya ,ab bas her aik ka hath paker kay baith
> > jaati . pehlay apna phir gurya ka phir ammi papa ka , phir saari class
> > main sab larkyoon ka , aur kartay kartay khandaan main mashhoor ho
> > gaey . apnay tak aur larkyoon tak shughal laganay ki baat to usay bari
> > pasand thi laikin jab bhi wo apni khala bi kay ghar jati wo aik hi
> > sawal kartin " Sna baiti, a zara daikh mairay hath main Haj ki lakeer
> > hay ke nahi " us nay aaj tak kisi kitaab main Haj ki lakeer nahi parhi
> > thi laikin wo aisay hi natak kar kay keh daiti "haan khala bi buhut
> > bari lakeer hay Haj ki " aur phir khala bi hath khainch laitin aur
> > pursakoon si ho jatin. khala bi kay is sawal ki waja say us nay kaey
> > kitabain chaanin laikin Haj ki lakeer kahin nahi mili . phir usay
> > apni khala bi ki tarha kaey log milay jo yehi sawal kartay " mairay
> > haath pe Haj ki lakeer hay ?" us kay paas is ka jawaab kabhi na hota
> > . Haj ki lakeer kay muamay say tang aa kay us nay is shughal ko
> > khair baad keh diya .
> >
> > College main gaey to is jaisay dunya aur bhi rangeen ho gaey , Allah
> > miyan kay ghar ki bajaey ab wo hazaar tareekhi jaghoon aur dunya ki
> > bay shumaar ala shaan emaratoon kay baray main parhnay lagi .
> > imartoon kay isi shauq ki waja say wo architecture main masters
> > karna chahti thi , college kay trips ka silsila bhi chalta raha aur
> > saath hi saath us kay kamray ki deewarain mukhtalif emartoon kay
> > posters say bharti rahin . aaj bhi wo abhi taj mehal ka khoobsoorat sa
> > poster laga rahi thi ke ammi ki awaz aey " Sna , gurya aey hay ."
> > jaldi say kursi say neechay utri , gurya kay anays say pehlay aina
> > daikha aur kursi jagah per rakhtay hi , darwazay pe khari Nida ko
> > garam joshi say salam kiya aur kaha " aray waah , aaj to eid kara di
> > tum nay " us nay galay miltay hoay kaha. " w , salaam . main nay socha
> > kabhi kabhi achanak bhi ana chahyay , ziada khushi hoti hay " Nida
> > baig maiz pe rakhtay hoay boli." to kia ho raha tha , " " aray wah
> > jaisay tum nay daikha hi nahi , ye daikho " us nay taj mehel kay
> > poster ki taraf ishara kartay hoay kaha . " waao ...that's nice"
> > kahaan say mara hay ?" Nida nay paas jatay hoay poocha ." maara nahi
> > yaar, khareeda hay pooray 75 rupay main" " maira khiyal hay ke dunya
> > main sirf 7 ujoobay hain laikin tumharay kamray main to hazaroon
> > ujooboon ki tasweerain lagi hain " Nida nay saray kamray ki deewaroon
> > per lagi , Eharaam-e- misr , Eiphel tower, Peica tower, WTC, Deewar-e-
> > cheen , Room aur Spain ki purani emartain, China Aur Pakistan ki
> > Dhair saari mashhoor-o- maroof emartoon ki choti bari hazaroon
> > tasweeroon per aik nazer dauratay hoay kaha . "Acha hay na kam az
> > kam tumharay bhaey jaan kay saRay hoay shauq say acha hay na jinhoon
> > nay dunya bhar ki garyaan saja rakhi hain dewaroon pe" Sna nay ankh
> > martay hoay khushgawaar mood main kaha . " Acha to kia tum un say
> > muqabla karti ho ""Nida nay maanee khaiz nazroon say daikhtay hoay
> > poocha ." main kahan , wo kartay hain mujh say muqabla " Sna nay
> > nazrain churatay hoay kaha aur saath hi poocha . " waisay japan ja kay
> > to buhut khush hoon gay ab" Nida nay qadray udasi say jawaab diya "
> > haan teen saal bad aein gay engeenering ki degree mukamal kar kay "
> > Sna nay usay chutki kaati aur hanstay hoay kaha " Aur aik added brand
> > new japani gaari aur japani gurya lay kay" aur saath hi donoon
> > hansnay lagin.
> >
> > chaar saal ka arsa parhayi main . imtehanoon main aur dunya ki
> > emartoon ko sarahatay hoay kab guzra Sna ko pata bhi na laga . is
> > dauraan Nida ki shadi ho gaey aur khud us ka nikah Nida kay bhaey
> > Arsalaan kay saath ho gaia aur ab do mah baad wo rukhsat ho kay
> > halkay sabz rang kay man pasand ghar main janay wali thi . wo apnay
> > kamray ki dewaroon per say tasweerain utaar kay sanbhaal kay rakh
> > rahi thi ke us ki ammi nay daikha to poocha " Sna !! ye tum saath lay
> > jao gi kia" " haan ammi jaan ,, bhala ye main bhool sakti hoon ..maira
> > asaasa hain ye" us nay lambay say dibbay ko band kartay hoay kaha ."
> > tauba hay , bhala in emartoon main Allah jany tumhain kia nazer ata
> > hay , wahan bhi ja kay ye gand sajao gi dewaroon pe " us ki ammi nay
> > nagawari say kaha . " ammi jaan aap ki baiti Architect hay koey mazaaq
> > nahi ...in kay baghair ab mairi pehchaan nahi. " us nay baray fakher
> > say kaha." acha tum pe to junoon sa sawaar hay , suna hay Japaan main
> > aur bhi khoobsoorat emartain hain ," us ki ammi nay sochtay hoay kaha
> > " haan ammi Arsalaan bata rahy thay , bas mujhay wahaan janay dain
> > phir daikhna kaisay kaisay design karoon gi " , " Acha tumharay janay
> > kay baad hum tumhari chachi kay paas Jeddah ja rahay hain hain aur
> > wahaan umray karain gay aur Haj kar kay wapas aein gay " us ki ammi
> > nay bari khushi say bataia . Sna nay ammi ki ankhoon main chamak
> > daikhi to sochnay lagi ke ammi ko mairi rukhsati ka koey dukh nahi
> > laikin Haj ki kitni khushi hay.laikin saath hi usay ye baat
> > tasaleebakhs bhi lagi kam az kam ab usay ammi papa ki itni fikar nahi
> > rahy gi.
> >
> > do maah baad rukhsat ho kay wo chand haftay Sabz ghar main rahi aur
> > phir Arsalaan kay saath japan chali aey . yahaan sharoo kay kaey
> > maheenay wo arsalaan kay saath mukhtalif jaghain daikhti rahi . phir
> > Arslaan ki company ki taraf say aik tour main wo log Itally bhi gaey
> > aur France bhi .dunya ko daikhnay kay saath saath usay ammmi papa kay
> > phone atay rahay . " kabhi Makkah ki fizaoon kay baray , kabhi
> > khana kaaba ki tareef kartay hoay aur kabhi madeenay raunaq kay
> > baray...wo sochti us kay seedhay saadhay waldain inhi do jaghoon ko
> > daikh kay itnay khush hain yahaan aa kay aaj ki duyna ki taraqi
> > daikhain to shaid sab bhool jain.
> >
> > Shadi kay doosray hi saal Arsalaan nay aik din kaha " Sna , main
> > soch raha hoon is baar ammi dady ko Haj karwaoon ..tumhara kia khiyal
> > hay?" ...Haj kay naam pe jaisay ,,, wo sakit si ho gaey , phir boli "
> > haan kioon nahi , mujhay kia aetraaz ho sakta hay " phir maiz pe kisi
> > naqshay pe jhuk gaey. " mager maira khiyal hay ke Hum bhi jain ,
> > mauqa bhi hay aur ammi dady ko company bhi rahay gi " Arslaan nay
> > Sna kay haath say pencil pakartay hoay kaha. Sna ko aik dam kuch na
> > soojha , khoey khoey si boli" haan is say achi kia baat ho sakti hay
> > " .." bas phir tayari paker lo ", Arsalaan nay ghoom kay khushi say
> > kaha ... do mah baad wo Haj ki saari tayaroon kay saath jeddah
> > pohnchay jahan say Arsalan kay waldain ko saath liya aur haj kay
> > liyay rawana hoay .Sna aur Arsalaan nay Makkah jatay hoay dhair
> > saari kitaboon ko parha . Ehraam aur Haj kay saray arkaan ko
> > samjha . aur saas susar ki rahnumaey main Allahumma labaik parhtay
> > hoay hajyoon ki saf main shamil hoay.
> >
> > Masjid al haram say kaafi pehlay hi sarak pe chaltay hoay itnay
> > rash aur hujoom main Sna nay logoon kay chehroon pe ajeeb sa junoon
> > daikha , jaisay maqnatees lohay ko khainchta hay usay laga , sab log
> > kahin khichay chalay ja rahay hain. Allahuma labaik ka wird kartay
> > hoay wo zameen ko daikh kay chalnay lagi ke Arsalaan nay ishara kar
> > kay kaha "Sna ,samnay daikho" Sna nay daikha ..sufaid marbal ki
> > phaili hoaey emarat charoon taraf hajyoon ka hujoom aur fiza main
> > " Allahuma labaik kay wird kay jadoo main laal choocnhoon walay mast
> > kabooter , us kay rongattay kharay ho gaey aur qadam ruk gaey,
> > bait-Allah main usay buhut pehlay hi Allah ka jalaal aur shaan ander
> > tak mehsoos hoey .Arsalaan nay us ka haath dady ko thamaia aur khud
> > apni ammi ka hath paker liya . Bait-al haram main dakhil hoay to
> > jaisay logoon ka sailaab beh raha ho Sna ki nazer jaisay jhapakna
> > bhool gaey us kay samnay khana kaabah tha . kalay rang kay ghulaaf
> > main dhaka hoa , khoobsoorat Ayaat say muzayan , us ka dimaghjaisay
> > shal sa ho gaia ho , usay nahi yaad kab Dady nay usay paker kay
> > chalatay hoay tawaf main ghaseet liya. phir jaisay us sailab main wo
> > behnay lagi , dady nay usay yaad karaia ke tawaaf main kia tasbeeh
> > karni hay . laikin us ki nazer markaz say na hat saki . hajr-e- aswad
> > kay samnay dady kay kehnay pe takbeer -e- tehreema kahi aur phir
> > usi markez kay gird behnay lagi . usay nahi yaad zameen pe qadam lagay
> > ke nahi ? kitna fasla tay hoa ? kaisay hoa? bas aik ajeeb si baykhudi
> > si thi jis main say her baar dady ko usay nikalna parta . aur aglay
> > rukan kay liyay samjhana parta .
> > muqam-e- ibraheem kay baray bhi dady nay usay bataia warna usay to
> > yaad na rehta .
> >
> > tawaf kay baad saee kartay waqt bhi us ki nazer behak kay markaz pe
> > par jaati . too palatna bhool jaati . saee kay baad wo ammi kay saath
> > Zam zam ki taraf gaey . pehlay piyas bhujhaey phir zaiq mehsoos kiya
> > to usay laga ke nazer to paani ata hay laikin paani mehsoos kioon
> > nahi hota . koey nabeena aurat ankhoon pe laga rahi hay to koey apnay
> > bachy kay sir pe daal rahi hay . usay aik aik nal kay peechay
> > khawateen ki qatarain nazer ain . aik lamhay ko us nay socha lakhoon
> > ki taadaad main Haj aur aik Zam zam ka Kunwaan . aur phir hazaroon
> > saal purana . us kay rongattay phir kharay hoay . dimagh shal sa hoa
> > aur wo pagaloon ki tarah Zam zam kay paani kay cheentay monh pe
> > dalnay lagi. wo jaisay jaisay paani kay baray sochti rahi sirshaar
> > hoti rahi .wo to taqreeban poori bheeg hi chuki thi ke ammi nay kaha "
> > Sna , abhi kay liyay bas karo " kisi aur ki baari anay do." usay tab
> > ehsaas hoa ke usay to peechay khari ammi bhool hi gaey thin. wo
> > sharmindigi say jaldi say peechay hat gaey.
> > bait -al haram say mina jany lagay to bhi mur mur kay daikhti rahi .
> > Haj kay tamam manasik ada hotay rahay aur wo bhooli bhatki si
> > baykhaber si jaisay dunya bhool gaey ho. ammi dady aur Arsalaan ki
> > rah numaey na hoti to jaisay usay kuch soojhta hi na .maidaan
> > Araafaat main dhoop ki tamazet main nidhaal si kaifiyat main usay
> > mehsoos hoa . khali maidaan main kisi ala shaan emarat ka jadoo nahi
> > hay , aur sooraj ki hararat main rait kay zarray hain ya kuch pather
> > jo Allah ki tasbeeh biyan kartay hoay mehsoos ho rahy hain . darakht
> > aur insaan main abadat ka aik jaisa nasha tha jis kay agay Sna ko
> > kuch dikhaey na diya. kahan say peenay ko paani mil gaia , aur
> > kahaan say khanay ko khauraak kisi ko koey sar-o-kaar hi nahi jaisay
> > . Muzdalfa say kankaryaan uthatay waqt usay khiyal aaia ke ibadat
> > kay is hissay main kia lutf ho ga?
> > is sawal kay jawab main jab wo kankaryaan marnay gaey to daikha ke
> > jamaraat per kankaryaan aisay girrahi hain jaisay chakki main say
> > Aata . usay aur ammi ko Arsalaan aur dady aik jaga khara kar kay ,
> > aga gaey aur sab kay hissay ki kankaryaan maar kay aey . Sna ko
> > ajeeb sa shauq jaga , neechay giri hoey kankaryaan utha kay wo us
> > taraf phainknay lagi.
> >
> > ab tak ki saari riazat kay dauraan usay neend ka ehsaas buhut kam
> > hoa , usay lagta tha jaisay us ka dimagh soay hoay bhi jaag raha hay .
> > Mina main qayam kay waqt albatta usay neend nay a liya , thakan ka
> > ehsaas jaga ye shaitaan ko kankaryaan marnay kay baad ka sakoon tha
> > shaid . Eid kay din naha dho kay , qurbaani kay baad , sab nay aik
> > doosray ko Haj ki mubarak di aur phir madeenay ki taraf chalay .
> > . tawaf al wida keh kay jab wo rukhsat honay lagi to jaisay sakoon
> > ka lafz yahin chore kay ja rahi ho . wo ronay lagi , ansoon main usay
> > yaad aaia ke itna to wo apni rukhsati kay waqt bhi nahi roey thi. usay
> > apni ammi ki ankhoon ki wo chamak yaad aa gaey jis nay unhain apni
> > baiti ki rukhsati bhula di thi. wo ye soch kay muskaey aur shukranay
> > ki dua mangaty hoay us nay Madeena munawara say anay waali hawa ko
> > khushi say mehsoos kiya .
> >
> > masjid Nabwi ki hudood kab sharoo hoey Sna ko nahi maloom albatta
> > logoon kay bahao main chalti hoey wo jahan tak ander ja sakti thi
> > chalti gaey . thandi pursakoon fiza say jaisay thakay hoay hajyoon ka
> > massag ho gai aho aur wo phir say tar-o- taza ho gaey hoon.
> > masjid nabwi ki khoobsoorat naey tarz ki wasee emarat main hafta
> > bhar namazain ada kin aur rozana hi Us muqadas jaali ko daikhnay ki
> > hasrat barhti gaey. wahaan auratoon aur mardoon ka elehda intezaam
> > tha aur ziyarat kay makhsoos auqaat thay .phir aik din asar ki namaz
> > kay baad unhain mauqa mil hi gaia . wo sunherijalyoon ko daikhnay lagi
> > aur nazer ander tak na janay kia dhoondhti rahi . wahaan darood -o-
> > salaam ka zikar tha charoon taraf . log duain kar rahay thay nawafil
> > parh rahay thay . ammi kay kehnay pe nafal ada kiya aur darood parhany
> > lagi . aik konay main wo baithi logoon kay hujoom kay darmiyaan say
> > jalyoon kay ander chaey hoay sakoot ko mehsoos karnay lagi . us nay
> > ankhain band kar lin ke un kay kanoon main peechay baithi aik khatoon
> > ki hichkiyoon ki awaazain sunaey din. wo halka sa muri. ansoon say
> > nahaia hoa chehra , dua mangtay hoay kamptay hoay hath . kamptay hoay
> > alfaaz . us nay zara tairana nigah daali to saray alam ka yehi haal
> > tha . girgiratay hoey . roti hoey . jholyaan aur daman phailey hoey ..
> > mangti hoey dunya . us ka dil jaisay halaq main aa kay thehar gia ho.
> > aik lamhay ko usay kuch nahi soojha ke wo kia mangay ...phir jaisay us
> > ki ammi ki awaaz sunaey di " Sna dua mango. hum Allah miyan kay ghar
> > phir say jain " aur jaisay wo kam sin ban gaey ho aur hil hil kay
> > yehi dua mangti gaey .usay yaad aaia ke Khala bi Haj ki khawhish
> > liyay hi dunya say rukhsat ho gaey thin . ...khala bi kay chehray kay
> > saath usay kaey chehray yaad aa gaey aur wo un kay liyay dua mangti
> > gaey ...
> > madeenay ki pur- raunaq dukaonoon say khajoorain aur tasbyaan
> > khareedin kuch aur masjidoon ki ziaratain kin aur wapsi ki tayari
> > hoey . Haj kay chand dinoo main hi wo dhair saari tabdeeli kay saath
> > . wapas Jeddah aa gaey . jahaan say Zamzam ki saughaat liyay Ammi aur
> > dady kay saath Japan aa gaey.
> >
> > Yahaan sab ki mubarkain milin , zam zam aur khajoorain bantin . aur
> > dawtain khaein. kisi nay usay Hajan kaha aur kisi nay khushqismat .
> > Zindigi jaisay us ki ab sharoo hoey thi . namaz ki pabandi kay saath
> > us nay dunay ki nit naey taraqi yafta emaroon say mehzooz hona chore
> > diya tha . wo aik qabil Architect thi ghar ko naey siray say muzayan
> > kiya .us kay office main ab aik say barh kay aali shaan masajid kay
> > posters thay , yehi haal ghar ka bhi tha . masjid nabwi kay
> > mukhtalif zavyay haray balb ki roshni main ghar main dakhil hotay hi
> > rah daari ki dewar pe tatreeb say lagay thay. aur ghar kay darmiyaan
> > .living main bait al haram ka nihayat hi khoobsoorat model tha .
> > aur is kay elawa aisa buhut kuch tha jin kay samany dunya jahaan
> > ki Architecture ki dunya hairaan aur mabhoot reh jati hay. aur kion
> > na hoon akhir ye dunya per azal say abad tak zinda rehnay wali
> > lazawaal emartain hain . jo ke kabhi dunya ka history nahi kehlain
> > gi.
> >
> > teen saal ka arsa guzra , Sna ki baiti Eman chotay qadmoon say
> > bhagti hoey aey aur maan kay braber baith kay , us ki taqleed main
> > hil hil kay kuch mangny lagi . Sna nay us kay haath piyalay ki tarha
> > banaey aur kaha ke " Eman ... mangoo ke hum Allah miyan kay ghar
> > phir jain " ye keh kay Sna nay Eman ki hathaili ko daikha ...aur
> > halki si muskaan say socha ke Allah karay is kay haath main Haj ki
> > lakeer zaroor ho , amin.