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Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#825584
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Tue, 12 Jul 2022 21:46
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Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:

Grey Dawn In the Deep South

In the grey dawn
when the heavy valley air takes the city
in foggy arms.

[...]

Read more at:
https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: vhugofan@gmail.c
Date: Wed, 13 Jul 2022 21:45
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Will Dockery wrote:
>
> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:

> Grey Dawn In the Deep South

> In the grey dawn
> when the heavy valley air takes the city
> in foggy arms.

> [...]

> Read more at:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: Michael Pendrago
Date: Fri, 15 Jul 2022 07:01
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On Tuesday, July 12, 2022 at 5:50:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
>
> Grey Dawn In the Deep South
>
> In the grey dawn
> when the heavy valley air takes the city
> in foggy arms.
>
> [...]
>
> Read more at:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

REPORTED AS SPAM
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#826260
Author: Will Dockery
Date: Fri, 15 Jul 2022 07:48
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On Friday, July 15, 2022 at 10:01:19 AM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Tuesday, July 12, 2022 at 5:50:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: 
>
> > Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery: 
> > 
> > Grey Dawn In the Deep South 
> > 
> > In the grey dawn 
> > when the heavy valley air takes the city 
> > in foggy arms. 
> > 
> > [...] 
> > 
> > Read more at: 
> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html
> RE

Thanks again for reading and commenting.

🙂
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#826248
Author: will.dockery@gma
Date: Fri, 15 Jul 2022 13:47
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Victor H. wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:

>> Grey Dawn In the Deep South

>> In the grey dawn
>> when the heavy valley air takes the city
>> in foggy arms.

>> [...]

>> Read more at:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

> Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...

Good morning, Victor, and thanks for reading and commenting, old friend.
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: tzod9964@gmail.c
Date: Sat, 16 Jul 2022 20:11
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Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Tuesday, July 12, 2022 at 5:50:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
>>
>> Grey Dawn In the Deep South
>>
>> In the grey dawn
>> when the heavy valley air takes the city
>> in foggy arms.
>>
>> [...]
>>
>> Read more at:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

> REPORTED AS SPAM

With all due respect, Pendragon, poetry in a poetry group could not be spam....

It is on topic...
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#826627
Author: Will Dockery
Date: Sun, 17 Jul 2022 00:20
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On Saturday, July 16, 2022 at 4:15:15 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>
> > On Tuesday, July 12, 2022 at 5:50:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
> >>
> >> Grey Dawn In the Deep South
> >>
> >> In the grey dawn
> >> when the heavy valley air takes the city
> >> in foggy arms.
> >>
> >> [...]
> >>
> >> Read more at:
> >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html
>
> > REPORTED AS SPAM
> With all due respect, Pendragon, poetry in a poetry group could not be spam....
>
> It is on topic...

Exactly.
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: Victor Hugo Fan
Date: Sun, 17 Jul 2022 14:21
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On Tuesday, July 12, 2022 at 5:50:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
>
> Grey Dawn In the Deep South
>
> In the grey dawn
> when the heavy valley air takes the city
> in foggy arms.
>
> [...]
>
> Read more at:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

Second read, quite cogent....
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#826811
Author: Will Dockery
Date: Sun, 17 Jul 2022 16:26
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On Wednesday, July 13, 2022 at 5:45:18 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> > Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
>
> > Grey Dawn In the Deep South
>
> > In the grey dawn
> > when the heavy valley air takes the city
> > in foggy arms.
>
> > [...]
>
> > Read more at:
> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html
> Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...

Thanks again, I'm fond of that one, as well.
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: vhugofan@gmail.c
Date: Tue, 19 Jul 2022 23:23
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Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Tuesday, July 12, 2022 at 5:50:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
>>
>> Grey Dawn In the Deep South
>>
>> In the grey dawn
>> when the heavy valley air takes the city
>> in foggy arms.
>>
>> [...]
>>
>> Read more at:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

> REPORTED AS SPAM

Poetry posts are not spam...
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Wed, 20 Jul 2022 11:58
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Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Tuesday, July 12, 2022 at 5:50:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
>>
>> Grey Dawn In the Deep South
>>
>> In the grey dawn
>> when the heavy valley air takes the city
>> in foggy arms.
>>
>> [...]
>>
>> Read more at:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

> REPORTED AS SPAM

No, it poetry and thus on topic in a poetry group.

HTH and HAND.
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#827882
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Fri, 22 Jul 2022 18:31
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Victor H. wrote:

> Michael Pendragon wrote:

>> On Tuesday, July 12, 2022 at 5:50:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>>> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
>>>
>>> Grey Dawn In the Deep South
>>>
>>> In the grey dawn
>>> when the heavy valley air takes the city
>>> in foggy arms.
>>>
>>> [...]
>>>
>>> Read more at:
>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

>> REPORTED AS SPAM

> Poetry posts are not spam...


Definitely not.
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#828517
Author: will.dockery@gma
Date: Mon, 25 Jul 2022 15:20
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Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Tuesday, July 12, 2022 at 5:50:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
>>
>> Grey Dawn In the Deep South
>>
>> In the grey dawn
>> when the heavy valley air takes the city
>> in foggy arms.
>>
>> [...]
>>
>> Read more at:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

> REPORTED AS SPAM

That's silly, poetry is always on topic for a poetry group.

HTH and HAND.
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: Zod@news.novabbs
Date: Thu, 28 Jul 2022 20:34
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Will Dockery wrote:

> On Wednesday, July 13, 2022 at 5:45:18 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>> >
>> > Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
>>
>> > Grey Dawn In the Deep South
>>
>> > In the grey dawn
>> > when the heavy valley air takes the city
>> > in foggy arms.
>>
>> > [...]
>>
>> > Read more at:
>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html
>> Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...

> Thanks again, I'm fond of that one, as well.

It is a fine work of poetic art.....
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#829150
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Fri, 29 Jul 2022 15:12
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Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> On Wednesday, July 13, 2022 at 5:45:18 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>> >
>>> > Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
>>>
>>> > Grey Dawn In the Deep South
>>>
>>> > In the grey dawn
>>> > when the heavy valley air takes the city
>>> > in foggy arms.
>>>
>>> > [...]
>>>
>>> > Read more at:
>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html
>>> Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...

>> Thanks again, I'm fond of that one, as well.

> It is a fine work of poetic art.....


Good morning my friend, hope your day is going well so far.
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#829678
Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Mon, 01 Aug 2022 17:33
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Victor H. wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:

>> Grey Dawn In the Deep South

>> In the grey dawn
>> when the heavy valley air takes the city
>> in foggy arms.

>> [...]

>> Read more at:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

> Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...


Good afternoon, Victor, I hope you and Mike are doing well.

🙂
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#830136
Author: Will Dockery
Date: Tue, 02 Aug 2022 17:27
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On Thursday, July 28, 2022 at 4:35:19 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > On Wednesday, July 13, 2022 at 5:45:18 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> >> Will Dockery wrote:
> >> >
> >> > Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
> >>
> >> > Grey Dawn In the Deep South
> >>
> >> > In the grey dawn
> >> > when the heavy valley air takes the city
> >> > in foggy arms.
> >>
> >> > [...]
> >>
> >> > Read more at:
> >> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html
> >> Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...
>
> > Thanks again, I'm fond of that one, as well.
> It is a fine work of poetic art.....

Thanks again for reading and commenting.
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#830137
Author: Will Dockery
Date: Tue, 02 Aug 2022 17:28
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On Thursday, July 28, 2022 at 4:35:19 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > On Wednesday, July 13, 2022 at 5:45:18 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> >> Will Dockery wrote:
> >> >
> >> > Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:
> >>
> >> > Grey Dawn In the Deep South
> >>
> >> > In the grey dawn
> >> > when the heavy valley air takes the city
> >> > in foggy arms.
> >>
> >> > [...]
> >>
> >> > Read more at:
> >> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html
> >> Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...
>
> > Thanks again, I'm fond of that one, as well.
> It is a fine work of poetic art.....

I appreciate the feedback and endorsement.
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: Zod @news.novabb
Date: Fri, 05 Aug 2022 19:58
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Will Dockery wrote:
>
> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:

> Grey Dawn In the Deep South

> In the grey dawn
> when the heavy valley air takes the city
> in foggy arms.

> [...]

> Read more at:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

3rd read quite a good poetical work...
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: will.dockery@gma
Date: Sun, 07 Aug 2022 20:32
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Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:

>> Grey Dawn In the Deep South

>> In the grey dawn
>> when the heavy valley air takes the city
>> in foggy arms.

>> [...]

>> Read more at:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

> Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...

Good afternoon my friend and thanks again for the nod.

🙂
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Mon, 08 Aug 2022 23:43
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Victor H. wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:

>> Grey Dawn In the Deep South

>> In the grey dawn
>> when the heavy valley air takes the city
>> in foggy arms.

>> [...]

>> Read more at:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

> Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...


Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

🙂
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
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Author: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Thu, 11 Aug 2022 19:28
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Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:

>> Grey Dawn In the Deep South

>> In the grey dawn
>> when the heavy valley air takes the city
>> in foggy arms.

>> [...]

>> Read more at:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

> Another all-time classic FAVE poem from the Doc...

Thanks again for the nod, General Zod.

🙂
Re: Shadowville Mythos: "Grey Dawn In the Deep South"
#831943
Author: vhugofan@gmail.c
Date: Sat, 13 Aug 2022 20:32
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Will Dockery wrote:
>
> Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos blog, "Grey Dawn In the Deep South" by Will Dockery:

> Grey Dawn In the Deep South

> In the grey dawn
> when the heavy valley air takes the city
> in foggy arms.

> [...]

> Read more at:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html

Second read, quite good...!
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