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Article #831559Re: PPB: Garden Wireless / Carl Sandburg
From: Michael Pendrago
Date: Thu, 11 Aug 2022 08:13
Date: Thu, 11 Aug 2022 08:13
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On Thursday, August 11, 2022 at 11:02:42 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: > On Saturday, June 25, 2022 at 1:26:39 PM UTC-4, george...@yahoo.ca wrote: > > > > Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog: > > Garden Wireless, by Carl Sandburg > > [...] > > this lone red tulip, a woman's mouth of passionate kisses, a nun's mouth > > of sweet thinking, here topping a straight line of green > Okay, it has two great opening lines ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ The above-quoted lines are not the poem's opening lines; but, instead, appear in the second stanza. I shall ignore (for the moment) my nagging suspicion that you haven't read the poem, and ask what you feel makes the imagery of these lines so "great."
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