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Article #831328Re: "A YEAR OF SUNDAYS" SUBMISSIONS - August 2022
From: ME
Date: Wed, 10 Aug 2022 04:46
Date: Wed, 10 Aug 2022 04:46
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UOn Tuesday, 9 August 2022 at 07:35:20 UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote: > On Tuesday, August 9, 2022 at 7:30:30 AM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote: > > On Tuesday, August 2, 2022 at 2:03:48 AM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote: > > > Start posting: > > One Night Alone > > > > I just wanted to get away > > from it all, breathe alone > > keep the TV dark, think about > > my old Chevy > > and times when nothing > > disturbed and I checked in > > grabbed a complimentary donut > > and headed to 222, seems > > I’ve always seen 222, on clocks, > > microwave, cell, not sure why > > it wasn’t a surprise > > when I was handed the key, > > but it seemed the best to > > not to question but accept > > for my one-night getaway. > > > > Rain was a companion, some drip > > from something needing repair > > diving onto the sill with an accurate > > cadence, > > but all were told of my night away, > > keeping worry at a minimum > > and thought a hot shower > > could be an appetizer to good sleep > > but the postage size soap and thimble size > > mouth wash > > told me to go home. > > > > I didn’t belong where I was > > but can say I tried. > > > > Edward Rochester Esq. > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > Castle of Pine > > > There was no moat > no drawbridge, no armies > to protect a simple castle of pine > but sunshine prevailed, > drifting through adolescent Maple, > dotting the earth where green > would soon overtake dirt and stone, > a rough raked suburban pasture > where young Azalea became > a spring bouquet and welcome mat > invited new neighbors. > > Inside, varnished floors and new smells > prevailed and the first look of a room > where a closet would be filled, and drapes hung > and dreams of what will be dominated > the thoughts of youth. > > It remains, that castle of pine, the Azalea > now overwhelms the stoop, the Maple seems too large > to stand but stand it does filtering the sunlight > onto memories that cannot be erased, a home > once filled with laughter and tears standing as a monument > to all that was as the years drift by. > > Edward Rochester Esq.
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