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Article #828399Re: Tongue
From: NancyGene
Date: Sun, 24 Jul 2022 18:12
Date: Sun, 24 Jul 2022 18:12
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On Monday, July 25, 2022 at 1:11:04 AM UTC, ME wrote: > On Sunday, 24 July 2022 at 20:30:18 UTC-4, NancyGene wrote: > > On Sunday, July 24, 2022 at 10:59:06 PM UTC, blackpo...@aol.com wrote: > > > Tongue > > > > > > That majestic muscle > > > flickering as if a Diamond Back > > > looking for scent and heat, > > > corners the prey > > > who gives up > > > without a fight > > > but whimper. > > > > > > Edward Rochester Esq. > > We like this, but think that the last line should be "but with a whimper." > What about βbut with a deep guttural moanβ? What about "but with a scream of yes! yes! yes!"
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