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On Thursday, July 21, 2022 at 9:50:18 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Sure, Pendragon we can go over the poem line-by-line. 

Line-by-line is a bit difficult to do, as the lines are all part of their stanza.  Let's take it stanza-by-stanza instead.

> For starters, I really like the title "Black Sunlight", full of doom and gloom and angst. 
> 
> You don't agree?

Most titles with the word "Black" in them do.  Although I'm not getting any angst from this one.

Of course it isn't exactly an original title.  It's both a book and an unrelated music video/song.

Ultimately, it relates to Revelation 6:12: “And I beheld when he had opened the sixth seal, and, lo, there was a great earthquake; and the sun became black as sackcloth of hair, and the moon became as blood...” 

So...

What do you like about the first stanza?:

The darkness of my life,

Was meant to erased by you.

But each stroke from your side,

Hurt me like a wound caused by a knife.