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Article #827627Re: BLACK SUNLIGHT
From: stars news
Date: Thu, 21 Jul 2022 11:08
Date: Thu, 21 Jul 2022 11:08
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Le mercredi 20 juillet 2022 Γ 00:35:18 UTC+2, Zod a Γ©critΒ : > Rachel wrote: > > > On Tuesday, July 19, 2022 at 2:50:19 PM UTC-7, vhug...@gmail.com wrote: > >> Rachel wrote: > >> > On Wednesday, June 29, 2022 at 9:57:23 AM UTC-7, sanal...@gmail.com wrote: > >> > > >> >> THE BLACK SUNLIGHT > >> >> ______________________ > >> >> > >> >> The darkness of my life, > >> >> > >> >> Was meant to erased by you. > >> >> > >> >> But each stroke from your side, > >> >> > >> >> Hurt me like a wound caused by a knife. > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> You were supposed to be sunshine, > >> >> > >> >> Of a life that was supposed to be fine. > >> >> > >> >> But you weren't that kind, > >> >> > >> >> And it twisted everything like curved line. > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> I knew you were going to break my heart, > >> >> > >> >> But a part of me really hoped you wouldnβt. > >> >> > >> >> But I guess, at the of the day, > >> >> > >> >> You never cared at all. > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> So donβt you dare come to my grave, > >> >> > >> >> And tell me that you cared for me. > >> >> > >> >> Cause those were the only words, > >> >> > >> >> That I needed to hear to live. > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> You are one of the major reasons, > >> >> > >> >> Of me not being alive; > >> >> > >> >> Cause when I needed you, > >> >> > >> >> You were deeply busy in enjoying your life. > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> I am not mad that you enjoyed your moments, > >> >> > >> >> But you were an important component , > >> >> > >> >> Of a life that I wanted to live, > >> >> > >> >> I really strived to have a happy life. > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> But you my sunlight didnβt provide my life the light, > >> >> > >> >> That I really wanted to revive,, > >> >> > >> >> But you were never enlightened my life > >> >> > >> >> And hence I call you the Black > >> >> Sunlight. > >> > that's so good. i love the "from beyond the grave" concept. > >> > >> > a lot of words are missing....hopefully you can review and fill in ? :)? > >> > >> The basic poem is excellent, needs a bit of polish... > > > one polish kielbasa....coming right up !!! ;) > Yeah....! We have financing for companies in projects of more than 5 M USD 0034651884888
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