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Re: BLACK SUNLIGHT

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From: stars news
Date: Thu, 21 Jul 2022 11:08
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Le mercredi 20 juillet 2022 Γ  00:35:18 UTC+2, Zod a Γ©critΒ :
> Rachel wrote: 
> 
> > On Tuesday, July 19, 2022 at 2:50:19 PM UTC-7, vhug...@gmail.com wrote: 
> >> Rachel wrote: 
> >> > On Wednesday, June 29, 2022 at 9:57:23 AM UTC-7, sanal...@gmail.com wrote: 
> >> > 
> >> >> THE BLACK SUNLIGHT 
> >> >> ______________________ 
> >> >> 
> >> >> The darkness of my life, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> Was meant to erased by you. 
> >> >> 
> >> >> But each stroke from your side, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> Hurt me like a wound caused by a knife. 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> You were supposed to be sunshine, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> Of a life that was supposed to be fine. 
> >> >> 
> >> >> But you weren't that kind, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> And it twisted everything like curved line. 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> I knew you were going to break my heart, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> But a part of me really hoped you wouldn’t. 
> >> >> 
> >> >> But I guess, at the of the day, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> You never cared at all. 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> So don’t you dare come to my grave, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> And tell me that you cared for me. 
> >> >> 
> >> >> Cause those were the only words, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> That I needed to hear to live. 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> You are one of the major reasons, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> Of me not being alive; 
> >> >> 
> >> >> Cause when I needed you, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> You were deeply busy in enjoying your life. 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> I am not mad that you enjoyed your moments, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> But you were an important component , 
> >> >> 
> >> >> Of a life that I wanted to live, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> I really strived to have a happy life. 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> 
> >> >> But you my sunlight didn’t provide my life the light, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> That I really wanted to revive,, 
> >> >> 
> >> >> But you were never enlightened my life 
> >> >> 
> >> >> And hence I call you the Black 
> >> >> Sunlight. 
> >> > that's so good. i love the "from beyond the grave" concept. 
> >> 
> >> > a lot of words are missing....hopefully you can review and fill in ? :)? 
> >> 
> >> The basic poem is excellent, needs a bit of polish... 
> 
> > one polish kielbasa....coming right up !!! ;)
> Yeah....!
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