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Re: A Work of Art / gjd

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From: Ilya Shambat
Date: Tue, 21 Jun 2022 21:00
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On Wednesday, June 22, 2022 at 7:15:19 AM UTC+10, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> George J. Dance wrote:
> >
> > A Work of Art
>
> > I tried to write a work of art
> > With all my passion, all my heart,
> > But no idea of what to say
> > Or what I wanted to convey;
> > My plans were doomed, and fell apart.
>
> > It really wasn't very smart
> > To take this trek without a chart:
> > Spontaneous writing's fine for play
> > But one cannot make art that way,
> > I should have realized from the start.
>
> > - gjd
> Quite an excellent short poem....

Yes, definitely.

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