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Re: The poem at 3 a.m. / gjd

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From: Will Dockery
Date: Wed, 15 Jun 2022 13:34
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On Wednesday, June 15, 2022 at 4:29:05 PM UTC-4, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
> On 2022-06-14 6:44 p.m., HC wrote: 
> > On Tuesday, June 14, 2022 at 5:55:25 PM UTC-4, george...@yahoo.ca wrote: 
>
> >> The poem at 3 a.m. 
> >> 
> >> The poem at 3 a.m. 
> >> does not want to be written; 
> >> it visits only to mock you. 
> >> 
> >> - gjd 
> > 
> > And she says, baby 
> > it’s 3 a.m. 
> > I must be lonely.
> Do you think I should change the time so that no one thinks of a song 
> that also uses "3 a.m."? Hmm, let's see. 
> 
> By George, I've got it! 
> "The poem at 25 or to 6 to 4."

I think it's good as is.

Of course Leonard Cohen had "4 in the morning, the end of December..."

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