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Article #821248Re: Hazel's Hex / Will Dockery
From: parnellos.pizza@
Date: Wed, 15 Jun 2022 06:59
Date: Wed, 15 Jun 2022 06:59
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Victor H. wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: >> >>> Hazel's Hex >>> >>>> She holds her hand >>>> against the glass. >>>> Before she gets >>>> too much memory. >>>> This game of numbers >>>> chances so high to lose. >>>> >>>> I hesitate >>>> to call her name. >>>> Deep humid night >>>> sick wildflower smell. >>>> Watch her knocking >>>> across the Village Green >>>> I feel a sinking inside. >>>> >>>> Looked into her eyes >>>> like a night move to hold her. >>>> But that's not possible. >>>> Frayed pitch >>>> I must have thought I'd tried >>>> but I stopped way short. >>>> >>>> Her beauty is eternal >>>> being weary and so wary. >>>> Reconstruct my heart. >>>> Or something like >>>> revisionist memory >>>> since it was nothing >>>> but scrambled dogs and >>>> chitter-chat. >>>> >>>> -Will Dockery >>> More of my life transformed into poetry/art. >> (From the archives) > Quite good and somewhat obscure to me.... It'll go on the blog tomorrow.
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