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Article #819080Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery
From: tzod9964@gmail.c
Date: Fri, 03 Jun 2022 19:36
Date: Fri, 03 Jun 2022 19:36
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Will Dockery wrote: > "General Zod" wrote in message >> news:af7d0d6b-d1c9-40dc-9a63-eb3ee15f93e5@googlegroups.com... >> Will Dockery wrote: >> >>> Apple Montage >>> >>> Sneaking around >>> with Cousin Jenny, >>> smoking menthol >>> beyond the sheds. >>> >>> Late summer vacation 1973 >>> in the backwoods of Tennessee. >>> >>> To the right >>> behind the barn >>> were apple trees. >>> >>> There were several >>> of those trees >>> and other trees >>> behind them >>> beyond a field >>> and behind them, other trees. >>> >>> Later, I stood near >>> as a crowd >>> watched Pops and my Uncle >>> cooking apple butter; >>> stirring the brown gunk, >>> boiling in a huge black kettle. >>> >>> I saw my father >>> secretly pass >>> a wine bottle >>> to my Uncle Clarence. >>> >>> I went from >>> breathing cold mist >>> out back behind the barn, >>> to breathing >>> the hot misty steam. >>> >>> The air smelled of apple fumes >>> and strong booze. >>> >>> -Will Dockery >>> >>> -------------------------------------------- >>> >> >> > Here is the "Apple Montage" poem, for scrutiny and comment. >>> >> >> Good let's discuss this now and sort out Pen's lies.... You know Pen, though, once he lies, he really digs in with it...! > You nailed it, Zod. > 🙂 Good day, and I thank.....
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