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Re: A Convolution in Her / Will Dockery

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From: will.dockery@gma
Date: Mon, 30 May 2022 23:46
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"Bill Evans"  wrote in message
> news:news.Thu.20151231.022821.PST.1374@mariposabill.com...
>> "Will Dockery" <will_dockery@outlook.com> posted the final
> version of "The Ride (Combat Zone).

> Will, I'm not sufficiently educated or experienced in giving
> a useful critique of this poem; I'll bet Mike would do a
> good job of that.

> But it would help me if you could explain a couple of
> things.  Asking them will make me look like a silly fool,
> but I'm down with that.

> I look at "Rastas" and think, huh?  Does this refer to
> Rastafarians, those mild-mannered pot-smoking laid-back
> folks from Jamaica?  Can that be right?  What am I missing?

> And what is meant by "black" in "black pigs of poetry"?

I wonder whatever happened to Bill Evans?

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