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Re: Dandelions / Zod (final edit)

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From: Michael Pendrago
Date: Wed, 18 May 2022 17:07
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On Wednesday, May 18, 2022 at 4:10:27 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> On Thursday, March 5, 2020 at 9:50:42 AM UTC-5, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote: 
> > On Thursday, March 5, 2020 at 9:38:23 AM UTC-5, George J. Dance wrote: 
> > 
> > > Yes, I know we all read "Dandelions" over and over again yesterday; but I wanted to give the man a clean, finished copy he can use to c&p or bump in the future (and let his earlier drafts get buried). Besides the change to 4 poems, one per season, I made two changes that didn't get into previous drafts: pluralizing "bringers" and making "campfire" one word. 
> > > 
> > I don't understand
> You get confused so much don't you Voodoo Boy....?

Only when reading inane gibberish, Stink.  Only when reading inane gibberish.


Michael Pendragon
"The poet has the last, definitive, word on the meaning(s) of his poetry."
-- Will Dockery on the multiplicity of definitives

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