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Article #814642Re: "Smartest Design In Modern" / Will Dockery
From: will.dockery@gma
Date: Mon, 16 May 2022 03:10
Date: Mon, 16 May 2022 03:10
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Zod wrote: > Family Guy wrote: >> Will Dockery wrote: >> > >> > > Today's poem on the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog: >> > > >> > = snip = >> > >> > Stop xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> >> Quiet, FOOL... >> >> [[poem restored]] >> Smartest Design In Modern >> >> Cold humanity >> remains of ice pellets >> and foggy after the rains. >> Alf is aloof >> he's brained on acid. >> and here we are >> trying to play cards. >> >> Cindy is so detached from him >> she's skinny and lanky >> sits looking out the window sadly. >> Alf falls off the boat >> into the icy drink. >> Climbs back on >> all roped and laughing. >> >> Cindy is naked looking >> with her nipples pointing through >> her wet t-shirt >> covered in red stripes. >> >> Ino's turned grey like a stone >> while the others watch. >> They wonder if he's fine >> or not. >> >> He didn't awaken until the next evening >> screaming for a smoke. >> >> Double trouble >> look out for the fox >> she'll leave you >> in her wake. >> >> Preacher's daughter >> she's so kinky >> I almost come >> just thinking about >> >> what she could do for me. >> >> Wander down >> the cold weeded hillside >> with whoever... >> well... >> I don't know her name? >> >> Right now >> that's just none of your business. >> >> Cindy's chestnut hair >> spooky looking green eyes >> her soul burdened as if by rocks. >> >> She always forgets >> her panties and socks. >> >> I'm knowing there was more there >> to her >> but it was a very long time ago >> and it was Winter. >> >> I was drinking in the rain >> when I encountered her. >> For the first time >> in a couple of months. >> >> I just couldn't give her >> the world >> or the harvest moon >> or Egypt. >> >> People keep telling me >> of the joys >> of purple passion. >> >> Of rain dances and miel honey >> and the rustle of wind >> through the valley. >> >> Entangling my shoes >> in the roots >> I was being seriously me. >> >> Cindy was standing >> hitch hiking with Petra >> a mystical slut >> of some reknown. >> >> They climbed into my Plymouth >> into the front seat >> and little stone eyes >> sat in the middle. >> >> Petra pulled a joint >> out of my ashtray. >> She said they needed >> to get somewhere >> out of the rain. >> >> I took them to Petra's >> mother's apartment >> where they took a shower together >> I waited on the sofa >> listening to a Doors album. >> >> The room was kind of dark >> and I had a hard on >> as I waited for the two girls. >> Watching the wall >> hearing >> riders on the storm. >> >> -Will Dockery / 12-8-81 >> >> ************************** Thanks for the endorsement, Zod.
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