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Article #812238Re: Dandelions / Zod (final edit)
From: Zod
Date: Fri, 06 May 2022 10:21
Date: Fri, 06 May 2022 10:21
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On Thursday, March 5, 2022 at 9:38:23 AM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote: > > Yes, I know we all read "Dandelions" over and over again yesterday; but I wanted to give the man a clean, finished copy he can use to c&p or bump in the future (and let his earlier drafts get buried). Besides the change to 4 poems, one per season, I made two changes that didn't get into previous drafts: pluralizing "bringers" and making "campfire" one word. I thank you... you helped my poem become great....
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