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Article #787550Re: Ping Karen: Re: Shadowville Mythos blog: Grey Dawn In Deep South
From: "jdcha...@gmail.
Date: Sun, 09 Jan 2022 21:28
Date: Sun, 09 Jan 2022 21:28
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On Sunday, January 9, 2022 at 5:39:56 PM UTC-5, genera...@gmail.com wrote: > On Sunday, January 9, 2022 at 3:30:09 AM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote: > > Zod wrote: > > > On Saturday, January 8, 2022 at 1:20:07 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote: > > >> > > >> Ping Karen: > > >> > > >> This is another new poem I wrote on July 19 2021, in fact, one I mentioned to you just before you suddenly vanished around that time: > > >> > > >> > Today on the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog, "Grey Dawn In Deep South" by Will Dockery: > > >> > > >> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html > > >> > > >> > *** > > >> > > >> > > >> Note that this poem was written the day after the "1982" poem you were confused about, which was written on July 18 2021. > > >> > > >> HTH and HAND. > > > > > Another excellent poem, and QUITE new... > > > > > > Grey Dawn In the Deep South > > > > > > In the grey dawn > > > when the heavy valley air takes the city > > > in foggy arms. > > > > > Almost chilly streets > > > that will lose this soon > > > in the sunshine noon > > > and afternoon hot as blazes. > > > > > In the grey dawn > > > when the frogs croak > > > and two cats watch for birds. > > > > > Rumbling sound > > > of the car next door > > > across the bushes that keep us apart. > > > > > In the grey dawn > > > I hear a distant train > > > that comes closer to my street > > > on a crawl from Macon. > > > > > Whistle whining > > > from a long way from here. > > > > > A Monday that will soon > > > burn with daylight > > > heat and brightness so intense > > > it seems loud and pounding. > > > > > -Will Dockery (7-19-21) > > ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ > > > Hope ye don't mind the repost Doc.... maybe Ktell will actually read it.... > > Not at all, hopefully Karen will see fit to read and comment on the poem, which, again, is another new one from last Summer. > > > > 🙂 > Yep, I hope Ktell has not left the group again already....! Maybe she is ignoring us.
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