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Re: Ping Karen: Re: Shadowville Mythos blog: Grey Dawn In Deep South

#787550
From: "jdcha...@gmail.
Date: Sun, 09 Jan 2022 21:28
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On Sunday, January 9, 2022 at 5:39:56 PM UTC-5, genera...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Sunday, January 9, 2022 at 3:30:09 AM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote: 
> > Zod wrote: 
> > > On Saturday, January 8, 2022 at 1:20:07 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote: 
> > >> 
> > >> Ping Karen: 
> > >> 
> > >> This is another new poem I wrote on July 19 2021, in fact, one I mentioned to you just before you suddenly vanished around that time: 
> > >> 
> > >> > Today on the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog, "Grey Dawn In Deep South" by Will Dockery: 
> > >> 
> > >> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html 
> > >> 
> > >> > *** 
> > >> 
> > >> 
> > >> Note that this poem was written the day after the "1982" poem you were confused about, which was written on July 18 2021. 
> > >> 
> > >> HTH and HAND. 
> > 
> > > Another excellent poem, and QUITE new... 
> > > 
> > > Grey Dawn In the Deep South 
> > > 
> > > In the grey dawn 
> > > when the heavy valley air takes the city 
> > > in foggy arms. 
> > 
> > > Almost chilly streets 
> > > that will lose this soon 
> > > in the sunshine noon 
> > > and afternoon hot as blazes. 
> > 
> > > In the grey dawn 
> > > when the frogs croak 
> > > and two cats watch for birds. 
> > 
> > > Rumbling sound 
> > > of the car next door 
> > > across the bushes that keep us apart. 
> > 
> > > In the grey dawn 
> > > I hear a distant train 
> > > that comes closer to my street 
> > > on a crawl from Macon. 
> > 
> > > Whistle whining 
> > > from a long way from here. 
> > 
> > > A Monday that will soon 
> > > burn with daylight 
> > > heat and brightness so intense 
> > > it seems loud and pounding. 
> > 
> > > -Will Dockery (7-19-21) 
> > ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 
> > > Hope ye don't mind the repost Doc.... maybe Ktell will actually read it.... 
> > Not at all, hopefully Karen will see fit to read and comment on the poem, which, again, is another new one from last Summer. 
> > 
> > 🙂
> Yep, I hope Ktell has not left the group again already....!

Maybe she is ignoring us.

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