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Article #787397Re: Ping Karen: Re: Shadowville Mythos blog: Grey Dawn In Deep South
From: Zod
Date: Sat, 08 Jan 2022 14:28
Date: Sat, 08 Jan 2022 14:28
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On Saturday, January 8, 2022 at 1:20:07 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote: > > Ping Karen: > > This is another new poem I wrote on July 19 2021, in fact, one I mentioned to you just before you suddenly vanished around that time: > > > Today on the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog, "Grey Dawn In Deep South" by Will Dockery: > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html > > > *** > > > Note that this poem was written the day after the "1982" poem you were confused about, which was written on July 18 2021. > > HTH and HAND. Another excellent poem, and QUITE new... Grey Dawn In the Deep South In the grey dawn when the heavy valley air takes the city in foggy arms. Almost chilly streets that will lose this soon in the sunshine noon and afternoon hot as blazes. In the grey dawn when the frogs croak and two cats watch for birds. Rumbling sound of the car next door across the bushes that keep us apart. In the grey dawn I hear a distant train that comes closer to my street on a crawl from Macon. Whistle whining from a long way from here. A Monday that will soon burn with daylight heat and brightness so intense it seems loud and pounding. -Will Dockery (7-19-21) Hope ye don't mind the repost Doc.... maybe Ktell will actually read it....
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