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Article #786936Re: Spinning Swiftly -- poem by Zod
From: General Zod
Date: Wed, 05 Jan 2022 16:40
Date: Wed, 05 Jan 2022 16:40
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On Saturday, June 19, 2021 at 6:49:06 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: > Zod wrote: > > > > Spinning Swiftly > > > Sprained ankle > > stumbled > > over the tracks. > > > Dark demon > > in a 24 ounce tin. > > > She lifts her kickers > > tomorrow's raging > > headache > > is all that remains. > > > Murrowed gill people > > on the lake shore > > at backwater > > Goat Rock Damn. > > > Without any special > > dispensation > > by the bog > > still running from the Mob. > > > All these nights > > of nothing > > but > > undercover dollars. > > > It was sold > > down the line > > awaiting my soul > > looking for a number > > or nookie. > > > Forever to prey > > pray > > to the gods of rock and roll. > > > Waiting > > wait in silence > > the other old man > > is dying. > > > By General Zod > > > *** > I like his poem, it goes all over the place, sure, but that's not unusual in poetry, as you know. Hey again I thanks...
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