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Article #786783Re: Spinning Swiftly -- poem by Zod
From: will.dockery@gma
Date: Wed, 05 Jan 2022 00:41
Date: Wed, 05 Jan 2022 00:41
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Zod wrote: > On Saturday, June 19, 2021 at 6:49:06 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: >> Zod wrote: >> > >> > Spinning Swiftly >> >> > Sprained ankle >> > stumbled >> > over the tracks. >> >> > Dark demon >> > in a 24 ounce tin. >> >> > She lifts her kickers >> > tomorrow's raging >> > headache >> > is all that remains. >> >> > Murrowed gill people >> > on the lake shore >> > at backwater >> > Goat Rock Damn. >> >> > Without any special >> > dispensation >> > by the bog >> > still running from the Mob. >> >> > All these nights >> > of nothing >> > but >> > undercover dollars. >> >> > It was sold >> > down the line >> > awaiting my soul >> > looking for a number >> > or nookie. >> >> > Forever to prey >> > pray >> > to the gods of rock and roll. >> >> > Waiting >> > wait in silence >> > the other old man >> > is dying. >> >> > By General Zod >> >> > *** >> I like his poem, it goes all over the place, sure, but that's not unusual in poetry, as you know. > I thank, Robert Pinsky insired me..... Works well.
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