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Article #746206Re: Spinning Swiftly -- poem by Zod
From: Zod
Date: Fri, 02 Jul 2021 14:27
Date: Fri, 02 Jul 2021 14:27
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On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:26:05 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote: > On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:22:17 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote: > > On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:19:23 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote: > > > On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:17:18 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote: > > > > On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:15:55 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote: > > > > > On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:11:33 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote: > > > > > > On Saturday, June 19, 2021 at 6:49:06 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: > > > > > > > Zod wrote: > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Spinning Swiftly > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Sprained ankle > > > > > > > > stumbled > > > > > > > > over the tracks. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Dark demon > > > > > > > > in a 24 ounce tin. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > She lifts her kickers > > > > > > > > tomorrow's raging > > > > > > > > headache > > > > > > > > is all that remains. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Murrowed gill people > > > > > > > > on the lake shore > > > > > > > > at backwater > > > > > > > > Goat Rock Damn. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Without any special > > > > > > > > dispensation > > > > > > > > by the bog > > > > > > > > still running from the Mob. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > All these nights > > > > > > > > of nothing > > > > > > > > but > > > > > > > > undercover dollars. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > It was sold > > > > > > > > down the line > > > > > > > > awaiting my soul > > > > > > > > looking for a number > > > > > > > > or nookie. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Forever to prey > > > > > > > > pray > > > > > > > > to the gods of rock and roll. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Waiting > > > > > > > > wait in silence > > > > > > > > the other old man > > > > > > > > is dying. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > By General Zod > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > *** > > > > > > > I like his poem, it goes all over the place, sure, but that's not unusual in poetry, as you know. > > > > > > I thank again for the read and comments.... > > > > > Junk > > > > You sound jealous... > > > You sound drunk....Did I just read the Navy sent you to rehab? > > So what, idiot...? > > > > You don't drink...? > No, I don't drink. Never...?
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