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Re: Spinning Swiftly -- poem by Zod

#746206
From: Zod
Date: Fri, 02 Jul 2021 14:27
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On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:26:05 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:22:17 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:19:23 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:17:18 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:15:55 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > > > On Friday, July 2, 2021 at 5:11:33 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > > > On Saturday, June 19, 2021 at 6:49:06 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > > > Zod wrote:
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Spinning Swiftly
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Sprained ankle
> > > > > > > > stumbled
> > > > > > > > over the tracks.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Dark demon
> > > > > > > > in a 24 ounce tin.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > She lifts her kickers
> > > > > > > > tomorrow's raging
> > > > > > > > headache
> > > > > > > > is all that remains.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Murrowed gill people
> > > > > > > > on the lake shore
> > > > > > > > at backwater
> > > > > > > > Goat Rock Damn.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Without any special
> > > > > > > > dispensation
> > > > > > > > by the bog
> > > > > > > > still running from the Mob.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > All these nights
> > > > > > > > of nothing
> > > > > > > > but
> > > > > > > > undercover dollars.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > It was sold
> > > > > > > > down the line
> > > > > > > > awaiting my soul
> > > > > > > > looking for a number
> > > > > > > > or nookie.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Forever to prey
> > > > > > > > pray
> > > > > > > > to the gods of rock and roll.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Waiting
> > > > > > > > wait in silence
> > > > > > > > the other old man
> > > > > > > > is dying.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > By General Zod
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > ***
> > > > > > > I like his poem, it goes all over the place, sure, but that's not unusual in poetry, as you know.
> > > > > > I thank again for the read and comments....
> > > > > Junk
> > > > You sound jealous...
> > > You sound drunk....Did I just read the Navy sent you to rehab?
> > So what, idiot...?
> >
> > You don't drink...?
> No, I don't drink.

Never...?

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