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Re: Spinning Swiftly -- poem by Zod

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From: Will Dockery
Date: Tue, 22 Jun 2021 04:59
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2021 at 7:45:44 AM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Saturday, June 12, 2021 at 7:19:16 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > Spinning Swiftly
> >
> > Sprained ankle
> > stumbled
> > over the tracks.
> Drunk
> >
> > Dark demon
> > in a 24 ounce tin.
> Drunk
> >
> > She lifts her kickers
> > tomorrow's raging
> > headache
> > is all that remains.
> Drunk
> >
> > Murrowed gill people
> > on the lake shore
> > at backwater
> > Goat Rock Damn.
> Drunk
> >
> > Without any special
> > dispensation
> > by the bog
> > still running from the Mob.
> Drunk
> >
> > All these nights
> > of nothing
> > but
> > undercover dollars.
> Drunk
> >
> > It was sold
> > down the line
> > awaiting my soul
> > looking for a number
> > or nookie.
> Drunk
> >
> > Forever to prey
> > pray
> > to the gods of rock and roll.
> Drunk
> >
> > Waiting
> > wait in silence
> > the other old man
> > is dying.
> Drunk
> >
> > By General Zod
> >
> > ***

You do act drunk, actually.

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