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Re: PPB: Dandelions / George Sulzbach

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From: Zod
Date: Fri, 02 Apr 2021 19:31
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On Friday, April 2, 2021 at 1:21:18 PM UTC-4, George Dance wrote:
> On Friday, April 2, 2021 at 2:27:04 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Sunday, May 3, 2020 at 2:03:30 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> > >
> > > Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
> > > Dandelions, by George Sulzbach
> > >
> > > Dancing dandelions
> > > Springtime golden
> > > later silver white
> > >
> > > Riders
> > > on the wind
> > > seeking new homes
> > > [...]
> > >
> > > https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2020/05/blog-post.html
> > Ping: Michael Pendagon:
> >
> > Example of Zod poetry liked by a respected member of the group, George Dance.
> Frankly, the total rewrite of this that Rachel did is much better, I feel. I put in another entry listing her as the author.

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