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Article #730192Re: PPB: Dandelions / George Sulzbach
From: Will Dockery
Date: Fri, 02 Apr 2021 12:33
Date: Fri, 02 Apr 2021 12:33
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On Friday, April 2, 2021 at 1:21:18 PM UTC-4, George Dance wrote: > On Friday, April 2, 2021 at 2:27:04 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote: > > On Sunday, May 3, 2020 at 2:03:30 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote: > > > > > > Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog: > > > Dandelions, by George Sulzbach > > > > > > Dancing dandelions > > > Springtime golden > > > later silver white > > > > > > Riders > > > on the wind > > > seeking new homes > > > [...] > > > > > > https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2020/05/blog-post.html > > Ping: Michael Pendagon: > > > > Example of Zod poetry liked by a respected member of the group, George Dance. > Frankly, the total rewrite of this that Rachel did is much better, I feel. I put in another entry listing her as the author. I haven't looked yet, is that on this page or a new one?
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