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Article #698644Re: Moon Water Dance
From: Paul V Winston
Date: Fri, 02 Oct 2020 14:30
Date: Fri, 02 Oct 2020 14:30
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On Monday, November 11, 2019 at 6:55:20 PM UTC-5, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote: > On Monday, November 11, 2019 at 6:51:55 PM UTC-5, Zod-The...@none.i2p wrote: > > > Moon Water Dance > > > > Negativity of the past > > taints my future. > > Implanted between > > the buttons. > > > > Oh, Fate > > bring me answers. > > To the questions > > I cannot bear to ask. > > > > Enchanted time > > sitting on a bank of sand. > > Aquatic energy flows > > millions of gallons moving. > > > > To my eyes > > from the night sky. > > I watch the Moon dance > > over Venus. > > > > *************************** > > > > One of my new poems..... > > > > Comments and reviews are welcomed...... > > sucked when first posted, sucks now. Try not to be so senile, Senetto.......
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