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Re: Moon Water Dance

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From: Paul V Winston
Date: Fri, 02 Oct 2020 14:30
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On Monday, November 11, 2019 at 6:55:20 PM UTC-5, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Monday, November 11, 2019 at 6:51:55 PM UTC-5, Zod-The...@none.i2p wrote:
>
> > Moon Water Dance
> >
> > Negativity of the past
> > taints my future.
> > Implanted between
> > the buttons.
> >
> > Oh, Fate
> > bring me answers.
> > To the questions
> > I cannot bear to ask.
> >
> > Enchanted time
> > sitting on a bank of sand.
> > Aquatic energy flows
> > millions of gallons moving.
> >
> > To my eyes
> > from the night sky.
> > I watch the Moon dance
> > over Venus.
> >
> > ***************************
> >
> > One of my new poems.....
> >
> > Comments and reviews are welcomed......
>
> sucked when first posted, sucks now.

Try not to be so senile, Senetto.......

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