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Re: a group challenge

#60535
From: "Dennis M. Hamme
Date: Sat, 15 Nov 2003 17:36
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Maiden of Maddness wrote:
>
> this may resemble a limerick but I'll still do it!
> {and if you don't like it, well who cares anyways you'll just get over
> it [eventually] or at least i would [hope] so!!}
>
> There was a young [lady] from [Dallas]
>
> Whose [husband] was so [drunk] he could [not see a thing].
>
>   He [danced] with a [whore]
>
>     As he [ran out the door] his [beer crashed to the floor],
>
> If my [life] was a [little more], I could [have gave my ignore and been
> better off than before].

I did /not/ say that the "student" would necessarily /derive/
anything from the exercise.
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