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Article #592874Re: Wooden Footbridge / Will Dockery
From: Will Dockery
Date: Sat, 08 Jun 2019 00:29
Date: Sat, 08 Jun 2019 00:29
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On Friday, June 7, 2019 at 5:44:34 PM UTC-4, Brainiac Five wrote: > Will Dockery wrote: > > > Wooden Footbridge > > > > Almost half way > > to Avalon > > was a footbridge. > > > > Out of the forest > > the end of the road. > > > > Now I hate > > what has become of it. > > Look, and smell > > what gravity and time > > have done. > > > > It was not a lot > > a Wooden footbridge > > Our children > > once used it > > to avoid the traffic. > > > > Let me contiue > > down Avalon. > > There in the marketplace > > is the Edgewood Inn. > > > > Mister Patel > > in his office with a smile. > > Roofers and good time girls > > roustabout for a while. > > > > Cross yourself > > according to > > Preacher Gulsbi's > > prayers. > > > > McMurray's barber shop > > comic strips and tobacco > > on my way home > > from dance school > > > > Especially for children > > Go and interact > > Edgewood School > > Next to the transport. > > > > December 8, 1974 > > Boy called Bob > > Pencil hanging > > He died at this level. > > > > I was there there last week. > > Look at that > > wooden bridge > > It was selected. > > > > Get rid of the weed > > And the gap between the water. > > Keep it in the dark. > > never > > Now let's move on. > > > > -Will Dockery > > Did you ever find the original edits....? ?? I did find a few edits, but they don't seem worthy of posting.
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