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Re: Wooden Footbridge / Will Dockery

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From: Will Dockery
Date: Sat, 08 Jun 2019 00:29
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On Friday, June 7, 2019 at 5:44:34 PM UTC-4, Brainiac Five wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > Wooden Footbridge
> >
> > Almost half way
> > to Avalon
> > was a footbridge.
> >
> > Out of the forest
> > the end of the road.
> >
> > Now I hate
> > what has become of it.
> > Look, and smell
> > what gravity and time
> > have done.
> >
> > It was not a lot
> > a Wooden footbridge
> > Our children
> > once used it
> > to avoid the traffic.
> >
> > Let me contiue
> > down Avalon.
> > There in the marketplace
> > is the Edgewood Inn.
> >
> > Mister Patel
> > in his office with a smile.
> > Roofers and good time girls
> > roustabout for a while.
> >
> > Cross yourself
> > according to
> > Preacher Gulsbi's
> > prayers.
> >
> > McMurray's barber shop
> > comic strips and tobacco
> > on my way home
> > from dance school
> >
> > Especially for children
> > Go and interact
> > Edgewood School
> > Next to the transport.
> >
> > December 8, 1974
> > Boy called Bob
> > Pencil hanging
> > He died at this level.
> >
> > I was there there last week.
> > Look at that
> > wooden bridge
> > It was selected.
> >
> > Get rid of the weed
> > And the gap between the water.
> > Keep it in the dark.
> > never
> > Now let's move on.
> >
> > -Will Dockery
>
> Did you ever find the original edits....? ??

I did find a few edits, but they don't seem worthy of posting.

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