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Article #589231Re: Expecting Inspiration / George Sulzbach
From: Peter J Ross
Date: Wed, 22 May 2019 16:31
Date: Wed, 22 May 2019 16:31
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In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 19 May 2019 18:58:12 -0700 (PDT), Zod wrote: > On Sunday, May 19, 2019 at 12:51:20 PM UTC-4, Peter J Ross wrote: >> In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 19 May 2019 09:46:16 -0700 (PDT), >> George J. Dance wrote: >> >> > Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog >> > Expecting Inspiration, by George Sulzbach >> > >> > Watching cars and people >> > something I do a lot. >> > Sitting near the alley >> > trying to bum a smoke. >> >> Well, nobody can accuse Dunce of misrepresenting the kind of life that >> Admiral Plod leads! >> >> If any residents of Columbus GA are reading, it's important to >> remember that giving cash to drunken beggars doesn't solve any >> problems. > > You are a bit of a snooty fool are you not.... Well done, Plod! "Snooty fool" is better than anything Dreckery has ever written. The assonance is enhanced by the differentiation of the consonants. > Peter the Putz? ?? That's not so good. Alliteration is so easy that anybody can do it - except Dreckery, of course. -- PJR :-) τὸν οἰόμενον νόον ἔχειν ὁ νουθετέων ματαιοπονεῖ. - Democritus
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