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Article #397919Decima For Decima / a poem by Will Dockery
From: Richard Oakley
Date: Thu, 26 May 2016 07:53
Date: Thu, 26 May 2016 07:53
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Decima For Decima Decima, aim your rod to screen Your life is only measured on internet surfage? Film into the eyeless abyss I like how 'eyeless abyss' sounds but what does it mean? To a level in lighted mist Darkness to light? Lighted mist means turning on the pc screen?? Tenth Norn of afterimage dream Tenth north? Street address? What's afterimage dreams? Life is but a dream? Nests of ghosts in a webbed beam Spiders as ghost on a beam? Or you are crawling on the web i.e. internet? Born illuminated and queer We're usually born with poor sight, is this to contrast how the net was born to carry information giving incite? Shake fate infinity mirror Fate, according to the parable and by definition, cannot be changed. It just IS. Glowing light child of Chaos string Who's this 'child of Chaos?' You? Are you trying to explain something new here? Night-swim bouncing and measuring The Fates never measured while swimming, or on a boat, their measures were precise? A weird sister without anger. Makes the most sense, she measured a life without malice. Just did her job. -Will Dockery I like how it sounds but the sense is, seemingly, lacking.
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