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Article #382815Re: The Ride (Combat Zone) / Will Dockery
From: Michael Pendrago
Date: Thu, 31 Dec 2015 20:36
Date: Thu, 31 Dec 2015 20:36
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On Thursday, December 31, 2015 at 10:46:30 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote: > "Michael Pendragon" wrote in message > news:87dd9457-380b-4fa3-8b8d-8ae3e0021ae2@googlegroups.com... > > On Thursday, December 31, 2015 at 6:25:16 AM UTC-5, Bill Evans wrote: > > "Will Dockery" posted the final > > version of "The Ride (Combat Zone). > > > >> Will, I'm not sufficiently educated or experienced in giving > >> a useful critique of this poem; I'll bet Mike would do a > >> good job of that. > > > > I'm afraid I'm a bit lost on this one as well. > > Lost? > > I felt it was a pretty much straightforward poem... in what way did it lose > you, if you can give me any leads on this... Black pigs of poetry and chemical jungles ... reminds me of a Manson rant.
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