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Article #382788Re: The Ride (Combat Zone) / Will Dockery
From: "Will Dockery"
Date: Thu, 31 Dec 2015 22:46
Date: Thu, 31 Dec 2015 22:46
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"Michael Pendragon" wrote in message news:87dd9457-380b-4fa3-8b8d-8ae3e0021ae2@googlegroups.com... > On Thursday, December 31, 2015 at 6:25:16 AM UTC-5, Bill Evans wrote: > "Will Dockery" posted the final > version of "The Ride (Combat Zone). > >> Will, I'm not sufficiently educated or experienced in giving >> a useful critique of this poem; I'll bet Mike would do a >> good job of that. > > I'm afraid I'm a bit lost on this one as well. Lost? I felt it was a pretty much straightforward poem... in what way did it lose you, if you can give me any leads on this...
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